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Reviewer: MagicKira Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2007 02:50 pm Title: Gone with the Wind

I love it. That simple. *shrugs* What can I say? I'm a sucker for Jam...;)

Reviewer: shaebay Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2007 10:45 am Title: Gone with the Wind

It's soo good, I'm just waiting for the other shoe to drop. Don't make her end up with Ben, arrg.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2007 10:04 am Title: Gone with the Wind

i loved that chapter. it was amazing. seriously great.

stories like this was honestly why i think i will nevr be able to break this fanfic habit.

and annoying keyboards like this is why this comment to twice as long to type as it should be. stupid keyboard. just thought you should know that my keyboard sucks 

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2007 09:59 am Title: Gone with the Wind

haven't read it yet, but photobucket.com is a great photohosting site. its where i use. also cando it at yahoo and google, but i don't know about those, cause i haven'tused em.

gonna read now, but wanted to let you know that 

Reviewer: Beth Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2007 09:28 am Title: Gone with the Wind

That was a wonderful chapter. I just wished it ended a little happier.

Reviewer: WildBerryJam Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2007 09:46 pm Title: The Deal

I can't tell you how much awesome this story is. I love how they're both changed (for the better) and i just smiled when they met in his office. I also love Jealous Pam ;) She should stake her claim soon! I'm on pins and needles for the central park date!!

Reviewer: Beth Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2007 09:35 pm Title: The Deal

I cannot wait to see how their date goes.  Poor Ben though, i feel bad for him, but Pam should be with Jim

Reviewer: shaebay Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2007 05:21 pm Title: Offers

This chapter got me unbelievably giddy. Write more!

Reviewer: Beth Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2007 03:30 pm Title: Offers

Thank god Jim transfered to New York....but I wish Jim and Pam got to work in the same department.  Please don't let Pam end up with Ben.  I like Ben, but i LOVE Jim

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2007 02:53 pm Title: Offers

You better continue! I was so happy, I was like, giddy with Pam. Haha. And then she goes and faints!?!?! WTF!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2007 02:12 pm Title: Closure

Poor Pam. Poor Jim.  Still not able to talk about their feelings and just like before, one staying and one leaving - both with their hearts in shambles.

Reviewer: uncgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2007 08:39 am Title: Something to Give Up

Keep going, I'm dying to know what happens.  Great story and I love the role reversal.  But seriously, my heart i breaking......

Reviewer: WildBerryJam Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2007 08:10 am Title: First Picks

I like where you're heading with this, please continue!!

Reviewer: Jen74 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2007 06:06 am Title: First Picks

I'm liking this so much, especially the Ben factor.  Keep going!

Reviewer: Beth Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2007 01:03 am Title: First Picks

It breaks my heart the way Jim and Pam left things, please let them talk soon!!

Reviewer: Marcine Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2007 11:35 pm Title: First Picks

I like Ben! Can't wait for the rest!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2007 04:55 pm Title: Closure

i thought when i read the chapter name that it was over... but it better not be :)

Author's Response: There is tons more to this story. I actually didnt expect to even do chapters to this story but the feedback was overwhelming and when I started creating chapters, they kept coming. As of right now, there are ten chapters out there....it gets good, just wait!

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2007 04:53 pm Title: Closure

I'm leaving another review b/c I just re read CHapter 5 and I'm an idiot.  Sorry about the confusion!  I'm so excited to see where this is going.

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2007 04:52 pm Title: Closure

I like where this is going. 

I am confused though...did they actually end up talking at the end of Chapter 4? 

I can't wait for more!



Author's Response: They didnt actually talk at the end of chapter 4. It was Jan that called Jim on the phone that night. It was supposed to make you think....keep reading, its gonna get better soon!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2007 06:41 am Title: Open Opportunities

HOPE! There is a light at the end of the tunnel.

Roy is being unbelievbly sweet. Good guy! 

Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2007 09:27 pm Title: Open Opportunities

I wonder who from Scranton will be getting promoted to the home office?  It would be great if Karen was and she and Pam are in NY and Jim is alone.  Can't wait to find out whose on the phone. 

Reviewer: Beth Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2007 09:15 pm Title: Open Opportunities

Well, I like what you did with Roy, but i don't really think it sounds like him.  I really hope that the call is from Pam, one of them needs to address things.  I also loved the whole promotion to NYC thing, it is a great way to put the two of them together while letting Pam take the internship.  I can't wait to hear this phone call.

Reviewer: uncgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2007 10:06 pm Title: Something to Give Up

This is heartbreaking, and wonderfully done.  Your writing style is terrific.  I have been trying to work through this idea myself, and I find myself liking your take better.  :-)

Keep going.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2007 02:28 pm Title: Breaking Hearts

I was wrong - Jim is able to fix things, yay!  You can really feel his conflicted feelings when he was talking about it to Karen - he's attracted to her but she's not Pam. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Beth Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2007 02:01 pm Title: Breaking Hearts

aww, that last line was so sweet!  I think that you wrote karen well, i think that if she knew the whole truth she would leave gracefully...i hope the next part will be more happy, cant wait to read it!

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