1 [Report This]Date: March 23, 2021 02:52 pm Title: There's so much to do or say without repeating.
Oh this is poetry and your writing is so gorgeous. d84;a039;d84;a039;
Date: November 23, 2007 09:33 pm Title: There's so much to do or say without repeating.
awesome! so sweet! loved it!!!
10 [Report This]Date: October 23, 2007 08:33 pm Title: There's so much to do or say without repeating.
That was so wonderful...best was that you made the whole day about the two of them. This reminded me of my own wedding day even though I had minor emergencies throughout. The best part, of course, was the time spent with my husband - from waking up together on our wedding day to the quiet moments during the day. You really captured that intimacy quite well.
Date: July 20, 2007 04:24 pm Title: There's so much to do or say without repeating.
This is the most beautiful Jim and Pam proposal and wedding story. I think I've read it 10 times and it still makes me tingle.
Thank you!
Date: February 13, 2007 03:10 am Title: There's so much to do or say without repeating.
You are still the only person who can write fluff in a way that makes you sniffle a little, at the same time.
There are so many, many things I adored about this, but to detail them would be to quote everything, and you know what you wrote. This paragraph, though?
And she has to find new places for his laughter to go so she pushes it behind her ribcage, behind her eyes, somewhere between her heart and her stomach.
Absolutely beautiful.
I loved everything else, too, of course: especially the bits in her room: the way he comes into her room for the first time, the way she puts away that picture of Roy in her drawer [something about that strikes me: she's maybe never been here since she called off the wedding, and I don't know why, but I like that.], the way he just rushes into her and kisses her, because it's nothing too original but the way you've written it and the fact that it's Jim and it's Pam just changes everything, and God.
The wedding itself was gorgeous, especially the way she kisses him before he's been told to, especially since you can always see that Jim loves her to bits [the way he brushes the hair out of her face], but the way this was written from her point of view adds this little feeling that makes me smile so wide, because they're fictional, but so happy. Oh.
And the reception was great, too, although I would kill to see what Dwight would've said to extend congratulations. =P Michael's line, by the way? Killer.
Yeah, OK, so I was aiming for a short review but this became a random blubbery mess; you reduce me to that, I'm afraid, so you've brought it upon yourself!
Thanks for writing this. Chases nightmares of Phyllis' Wedding away. ;)
Date: February 13, 2007 01:15 am Title: There's so much to do or say without repeating.
Ok, I need this to happen....like now. Right now. Soooo adorable! I loved the last paragraph! The descriptions were beautiful!
Date: February 12, 2007 09:42 pm Title: There's so much to do or say without repeating.
And she has to find new places for his laughter to go so she pushes it behind her ribcage, behind her eyes, somewhere between her heart and her stomach. As he bends down to kiss her with constellations just behind his head, she wonders how full she can get before she bursts.
That's so freaking beautiful I can't stand it!!!!! OMG I just loved that so much. I can't really express how much. ::sigh:: just beautiful
Date: February 12, 2007 10:53 am Title: There's so much to do or say without repeating.
That was just so beautiful and sweet andperfect for them. I wish I had more developed thoughts about it all but I don't. It just touched me.
Date: February 12, 2007 10:39 am Title: There's so much to do or say without repeating.
Do you think we'll ever get here? It seems so far away right now. Lovely, as usual- you make it tantalizingly real.
10 [Report This]Date: February 12, 2007 07:31 am Title: There's so much to do or say without repeating.
This was so beautiful, unfold. The impromptu proposal seems just like them, and the small wedding... wow, just wonderful!
10 [Report This]Date: February 12, 2007 06:06 am Title: There's so much to do or say without repeating.
You do such a beautiful job with them, of making me get that feeling in my chest as if I'm the one who's going to burst with happiness, and not just Jim and Pam. And I'm not just talking about the sweet happiness of the wedding either (which was one of the sweetest weddings I've ever read), but even their quiet time in the first section, and the morning of their wedding when they woke up together, so intimate and sweet with each other. It makes me almost cry.
Date: February 12, 2007 04:58 am Title: There's so much to do or say without repeating.
So redicuoisuly sweet and happy :)