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Reviewer: takemyhandx Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2007 08:27 am Title: On the Rocks

Niceee ! I didn't know 911 could be busy... hmm . Well i guess it's something new i learned then!

Author's Response: LOL. Unfortunately it's always busy out here in So Cal. I've called a couple of times and had it be busy. lol. So sad!

Reviewer: Geinnob Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2007 07:21 pm Title: On the Rocks

I owe you a MASSIVE apology.  I read everything you write - usually multiple times - and let out an embarrassing happy noise whenever I get a "LoveFool has a new story" e-mail, but I never review.  So, please accept this as an apology.  Your stories make me happy, and are wonderful on many levels.



Author's Response: Apology accepted!!!!!! Thanks so much for being a loyal reader, and I DO appreciate the feedback. Keep it coming! :-)

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2007 07:17 pm Title: On the Rocks

more more! right now! sorry...impatient I guess

this is great 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for that impatience! That makes me smile...and write. I hope you enjoyed the rest of the story.

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed 5 [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2007 01:50 pm Title: On the Rocks

You can NOT leave us there! More!


Author's Response: hehehe. All us bad writers with our cliffhangers! lol It's amazing how we'll continue to torture readers that way when we hate it too!

Reviewer: starblossom56 Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2007 10:01 am Title: On the Rocks

Ooh, I love this! I cannot wait to see the rest.

 

The Jim/Karen scene was just...GUH. Can that happen on the show, please? PLEASE? :D



Author's Response: I WISH!!! I hope you enjoyed the rest of the story!

Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2007 09:03 am Title: On the Rocks

This story is really good! I'm loving all these post-"Cocktails" fics all you great writers are coming up with!

Favorite part so far: 

“God you can’t even trash talk the right way,” Roy said laughing again. “Are you sure you made it with this guy Pam? He’s so gay.”

God, Roy would absolutely say this. SO in character.

Man, I can't WAIT to read what comes next! Adding this to favorites. 



Author's Response: Yay!!! It's been favorited!!! That makes my day! Thanks so much for the feedback...Roy is such a tool, but pretty funny somtimes.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2007 06:36 am Title: On the Rocks

Go Jim Go.  I love how he was trying to get Roy outside and away from Pam. 

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the feedback! Jim-Jim-Jim <jerry springer style chant>

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2007 05:59 am Title: On the Rocks

AAGGGHHH!!! please, please write more!!! so good.. but write more!! (forgive my incoherence, i'm sleepy and i'm that scared about what's gonna happen next.)

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2007 05:34 am Title: On the Rocks

Oh goodness.  I love Jim simultaneously wanting to diffuse the situation (ie get Pam to stay back) and to get a few punches in. 

Awesome. 

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2007 05:12 am Title: On the Rocks

Wow. Jim, taking on Karen and now Roy...is it wrong that I find seeing him in fight mode incredibly sexy? You can positively smell the testosterone in this chapter. Love his version of trash talk too (hee!) How cool would it be on the show if Jim turned out to be confrontational, when Roy goes after him? Cannot wait for you to update!

Reviewer: Snoznoodle Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2007 03:32 am Title: On the Rocks

OMG another great story! Update SOOO quick!

Reviewer: LindsayLeigh Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2007 01:21 am Title: On the Rocks

Oh snap. You do know how to write a cliff-hanger, don't you? Someone's in a lot of trouble right about now--please update soon so that I know who! Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: moofoot Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2007 01:19 am Title: On the Rocks

Oh, by the way, I have to say that Jim telling Karen he wasn't asking for her permission and standing so steadfastly to that made me want to go ha! with gusto, because goodness, the amount of Karen!love this fandom gives is a bit scary and a bit saddening because what if she lasts longer than we want her to?!

Anyway. Loved this chapter. There's no wimpy!Jim like a lot of people have made him but there's no superstrong!Jim, either, which is awesome, and Not a chance. How long had he wanted to do this?  made me want to get up and go WOOO because - obviously, the guy's WOOworthy. 

Love where this is going. Thank you, LoveFool; with every chapter my spirits are improving. I've had enough angst.  

Reviewer: shan21 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28, 2007 11:19 pm Title: On the Rocks

How is it that you keep getting exponentially more awesome with each new chapter? At a certain point the awesome has to hit it's peak, right?

This chapter was AMAZING. When she opened the door and Roy was there I almost screamed. And I flipping love that Jim didn't back down. This part:

Not a chance. How long had he wanted to do this?

Awesome. I haven't really read anything where Jim wants to fight Roy, but it rings very true.

Add to that the fact that the dialogue is funny and spot on, and you have yourself a heck of a lot of awesome. 

 

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