1 [Report This]Date: February 16, 2019 11:58 am Title: Straight Up
I love this one. It is the rare short good fic that I don't even want more of because I think it hits its key moment at the right moment and it is just perfect as is.
Date: July 12, 2009 04:01 pm Title: Straight Up
oh yeah!
Date: January 29, 2009 06:38 am Title: Straight Up
I had some time this morning so I decided to read some of your previous stuff. I loved this story so much...GUH! I loved how Jim held his ground with Karen, and the ER waiting room scene was gold.
Brava.
PS Oh yeah - fabric softner and milk in the hot chocolate - what a killer combination in a man. Irresistable.
10 [Report This]Date: May 26, 2008 05:23 pm Title: Straight Up
I loved this! It was perfect! The last line just had me grinning to no end. Great job!
"I’m not sorry Roy’s here in the hospital......actually I’m pretty pissed he fell down because I really wanted to hit him…and it just seemed wrong to do it once he was already lying there…”
PERFECT!
Date: November 12, 2007 08:45 am Title: Straight Up
aww that was cute i totally loved ut
Date: November 12, 2007 08:44 am Title: Straight Up
aww that was cute i totally loved ut
7 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2007 09:22 pm Title: Straight Up
wow i loved it! you captured jim really well and i have trouble doing that. nice job
9 [Report This]Date: November 07, 2007 09:54 am Title: Straight Up
Riveting!! I had to plug thru the whole thing even though I am late for getting out the door! Love the Springer tie in. Thanks for posting this.
Date: November 06, 2007 10:09 am Title: Straight Up
Awww, great story! Roy's a fool. Jim's sweet. Gotta love Romance/Angst. :D
Tbh - I'd have liked it if Jim had hit him too :P
10 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2007 01:21 pm Title: Straight Up
I loved every second of this! You struck the perfect balance between angst and hope- making me nervous like "oh no! don't stay at the party with that hussy Karen!" while giving subtle hints that JAM will conquer all. *sigh* Gold stars all around! :)
Date: March 04, 2007 10:17 pm Title: Straight Up
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHhhhhmazing. This line here:
"actually I’m pretty pissed he fell down because I really wanted to hit him…and it just seemed wrong to do it once he was already lying there…”
Made me smile this huge goofy grin, because I love imagining Jim saying this. I am completely enamoured with this fic. Thank you!
Author's Response: Hehehe, thanks Shan! And thank you so much for the reccomendation over at Twop!!! My story is over now...and it's up to you to have Jim get some hits in! :-)
Date: March 04, 2007 07:22 pm Title: Straight Up
“I’m not sorry Roy’s here in the hospital......actually I’m pretty pissed he fell down because I really wanted to hit him…and it just seemed wrong to do it once he was already lying there…”
That was absolutely the best line! I'm loving this story and I really hope you'll continue it
Author's Response: hahah! Jim wanting to get a little violent! Yep....one of these days I'll have to write something where he DOES actually get a couple of licks in!
Date: March 04, 2007 04:04 pm Title: Straight Up
Aw! Sweet story, very cute ending. Perfect last line :)
Author's Response: THANKS!!!! Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: March 04, 2007 03:47 pm Title: Straight Up
this was great. so actiony and then sweet and just. yay!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!!! Action can be a lot of fun I'm finding out!
8 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2007 12:39 pm Title: Straight Up
Great job. Love that Jim had to come see Pam even though Karen didn't want him to and that Jim & Pam were finally honest with each other. I love happy endings.
Author's Response: Ha! Take THAT Karen! lol. It was so much fun writing Pam and Jim finally getting together. Thanks a bunch for the feedback!
9 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2007 08:37 am Title: Straight Up
Aw this is too great! Are you writing more? Cause I'd love to see more!!
Author's Response: Sorry, that's the end of the story. It was a lot of fun to write something different than I usually do. Hopefully I'll be updating one of my other stories soon though. Thanks so much for your great feedback and encouragement!
10 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2007 07:53 am Title: Straight Up
Outstanding work, really well done. Nice job of getting them together in a realistic way. My first piece I posted has some similar themes (check it out if you like) but your is more fully realized. Great job.
Author's Response:
Thanks Brokenloon! I appreciate the feeddback so much! Especially the "realistic" part. I wish the OFFICE would realize they can get these two together and still have it be realistic. ::sigh:: I'll check out your piece!
Date: March 04, 2007 02:47 am Title: Straight Up
Oh, I love you, I love this, I love so many things about this it's insane. The talking-things-out, the Jerry Springer, the kisskisskiss. When they're being idiots they make me sad, but when they get their crap together they make me ridiculously happy. Thank you for making me ridiculously happy. ;)
Author's Response: hahaha....isn't that true...they do the same for me - ridiculously happy and completely frustrated as well. So sad that a TV show has this big of an effect on us! Thanks so much for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: March 03, 2007 11:22 pm Title: Straight Up
YAY!!!! THANK YOU! at least someone's listening to what the people want! this was awesome lovefool. very different from your usual fluff, but absolutely terrific job!
Author's Response: yay!!! So glad you liked it! I wish the OFFICE would GIVE THE PEOPLE WHAT THEY WANT ALREADY!!!