Date: March 06, 2007 11:15 pm Title: Party Planning Party
I am so addicted to this story. I want it to be like 30 chapters long, not 3. Can you swing that for me? K, thanks.
I actually feel my stomach flip like Pam's must when little things like the shaving kit slip out. Jeeze. I can't wait to see what you have planned for chapter 3.
9 [Report This]Date: March 06, 2007 07:19 pm Title: Party Planning Party
Wow...my heart just breaks for Pam...especially the last part! Holy crap. I hope either Karen's lying or someone's about to slap Jim...
8 [Report This]Date: March 06, 2007 03:46 pm Title: Party Planning Party
HA, I love the immense awkwardness of this! You've got the character voices down so well-it really works. And I love that Jim & Karen actually have a normal seeming relationship and that Karen is nice & fun in your fic--that's definitely a rare viewpoint in fic these days :)
Date: March 06, 2007 12:58 pm Title: Party Planning Party
Seriously? I LOVE your dialogue. SO funny! Like this: <em>
Fact: Receptionists know how to pick locks. Another fact: You did not pick any locks last night. Why not?”
“Okay, Dwight, you know what? No.” ...
“I’m warning you, Pam! I will be watching for the telltale symptoms of salmonella. Diarrhea, fever, vomiting, cramps, headache, fatigue –" </em>
Date: March 06, 2007 12:10 pm Title: Party Planning Party
Wow, I can definitely see Pam being a bit shell-shocked after hearing that Jim's going to move in with Karen. Karen's dialogue in that scene seemed just like her, too. Oh, boy. Pam's been avoiding him for three weeks?? She needs to step up to the plate. Seriously. (Of course, I've been saying this for the last five months. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: March 06, 2007 12:07 pm Title: Party Planning Party
i'm loving this so far! :D
Date: March 06, 2007 11:04 am Title: Party Planning Party
This makes me want to smack Karen hard. I think that's a tribute to your excellent writing. Poor Pam. Can't wait for the update!
Date: March 06, 2007 10:47 am Title: Party Planning Party
I want some peanut butter crackers. I could make my own, butwhere is the fun in that. dammit though, now i really do want some. *goes off to make peanut buttercrackers* not as good as vendin machine ones, but they have to suffice
Date: March 06, 2007 10:37 am Title: Party Planning Party
you're killing me. seriously. I felt so bad for Pam when she found Jim's boxers and then when Karen came in and said they were moving in together! That just killed me a little inside I think. Please end on a good note!! Great job, I can't wait for more!
Date: March 06, 2007 10:34 am Title: Party Planning Party
OMG -- I am not fine either!!! Hoping ch. 3 has enough jam to wash down that peanut butter that is stuck in my throat. Ow.