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Reviewer: Jamster Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2007 01:41 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?

Very interesting and angsty chapter Moxie!

I don't think I can see Karen taking it that far, but other then that I definitely can't wait until chapter seven!

Reviewer: StarryDreamer Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2007 01:29 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?

Ouch.  Karen is such a bitch. Bitch! Bitch! Bitch!  The earrings are coming off and I'm going to take care of her!  *lol*  I love this story and I hope you don't hold back from us and post ch. 7 soon.  I'm dying to know what decision Jim will make- will he go and see Pam that night, as planned??  Sheesh... looks like I'm going to have return to the speculation thread again... ;-) Absolutely LOVING the story!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2007 01:29 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?

oh, holy crap!  That is one Bitchy!Karen!   But yay and goodbye to Karen!  (Is that mean?)

Soooo glad you are feeling better (I hope) and that you gave us this new chapter, and now I am even more keyed up for Ch. 7 and Jim going to see Pam.  You are making me look forward to Monday and that is just wrong!!

Reviewer: grapenutbeats Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2007 01:25 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?

Feisty!  So much angst!  I'm curious to see what Jim will do here...

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2007 01:23 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?

feel better.

now, can i say... whoa. karen is angry here. well, she has every right to be. but still, whoa.  that was a nasty break up. there really is no way she isn't going to get hurt. but yeah. i can't wait until monday if you do get the next chapter up. i want to see how it goes with pam!

Reviewer: Vaughnlove Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2007 01:19 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?

Moxie, words can't express how much talent you have. This so good! I can't wait for more. (Like little birds we are, begging for the worm)

Reviewer: slpchic Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2007 01:18 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?

oooooooo..UPDATE SOON!! Yikes!!  I can't wait to see what happens next!  So exciting!  I hope that this doesn't stop Jim from going to talk to Pam.

Reviewer: Maybe Once Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2007 01:09 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?

And I better not see the two of you so much as look at each other until I leave this place. Then you can both go fuck yourselves.”

 

(OR EACH OTHER.  IN GRAPHIC DETAIL, PLEASE.) 

Oh, dear.  Did I type that with my out-loud fingers? 

Reviewer: Dooflegna Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2007 01:09 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?

Ahhhhh, Moxie.  Breaking bandwith one chapter at a time.  Get better, and keep writing!

Reviewer: Office O Holic Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2007 01:07 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?

Awesome as usual Mox. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: mess of jess Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2007 01:06 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?

whoa! Angry!Karen is incredibly vindictive. I love it! This was so great, with all the tension and the arguing. It was really in-character, and I genuinely think that Karen is a nice person. I'm psyched about Jim/Pam time though :)
I'm so glad I read this. Now I can go take a nap and not check MTT all the time (in a non-obsessive way, of course) for this chapter. Thanks Mox--it was great :)

Reviewer: WalkInLove Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2007 01:02 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?

I am completely speechless in the best way possible. 

Reviewer: MaiaDawn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2007 02:31 pm Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky

Mox!  I seriously think I am going to burn a hole in my stomach, i'm so eagerly awaiting the next chapter!  Definitely my new favorite story (but then, I'm not really surprised by that...)

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14, 2007 05:56 pm Title: And time yet for a hundred indecisions

Aw, this was a cute chapter - I love them having a "date" over Miss Congeniality and Jim really starting to open up about *his* relationship woes... even if he's still got a long way to go to be totally honest! And it's nice to see them just getting along.

Reviewer: classybroad Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14, 2007 04:26 pm Title: And time yet for a hundred indecisions

This story makes me so happy. I got hooked two days ago and have been checking back obsessively to read more!!

Reviewer: beruco Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13, 2007 02:01 pm Title: And time yet for a hundred indecisions

So Mox..when are Squirrely and WD going to delve into some under-the-table cyber sex? OMGOMG. I love the online sneakiness.

I am just on my toes waiting for the next chapter. my refresh button may go on strike. :|

<3

Reviewer: Amalia Kensington Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13, 2007 08:53 am Title: And time yet for a hundred indecisions

MOX!!!!!!!!!!!
Okay, I thought that I was the only person who really loves Ms. Congeniality (and Two Weeks Notice, actually). I'm so glad that I'll be able to talk to Jim about it.
....oh wait...
hee.
and who is Vexin? Because, omg, it's totally Meredith, isn't it? Or Phyllis!! I can so see it...

I can't wait for more of this!!! It's totally making being at work that much easier to handle.
Thanks.
cheers.
--Lex

Reviewer: Rayne Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13, 2007 08:15 am Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky

Awesome!

Reviewer: Paper Jam Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13, 2007 02:41 am Title: And time yet for a hundred indecisions

So, I reviewed this chapter before, but I guess it was lost to the great internet beyond. So mysterious! You probably don't need more people telling you this is awesome, but here I am. I look forward to the next chapter! Soooo good. Also, I apologize, but I think it was my suggestion that someone start a Squirrel fanfic thread. Oops. I was kidding, totally kidding, but I guess that's how much people love you! Nice!

Reviewer: mitahrogers Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 13, 2007 01:16 am Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky

just read through it all for the very first time. I think that it's safe to say that I'm looking forward to the next installment about as much as I am for the next new office, and even more than the 7th Harry Potter, and really, that is saying something.

 I'm so impressed with your creativity. What a brilliant way to capture both of their perspectives and yet tease us with the new distance (as well as closeness) or their new predicament.  Not only does this method keep it believable, but your interweaving of the other characters keeps it real as well. I love it. Truly a fanfic masterpiece.

Reviewer: aurorasmile Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13, 2007 01:02 am Title: And time yet for a hundred indecisions

ahhh! I'm so glad you updated! we've been dying for a new chapter!!  i hope jim dumps karen in the next chapter and then pam mentions it in the chat the next night  anyway this chapter was awesome

Reviewer: slpchic Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2007 11:39 pm Title: And time yet for a hundred indecisions

he he he he UPDATE SOOONNN!!!

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2007 10:38 pm Title: And time yet for a hundred indecisions

ugh, they're killing me! I NEED him to end things with Karen and I NEED Pam to realizre it's him. lol. LOVE THIS STORY!!!

Reviewer: Tangy_Zip Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2007 09:43 pm Title: And time yet for a hundred indecisions

Totally worth the wait...but please [/whine] don't make the wait for the next chapter so long!  Though in the meantime, I suppose I could speculate about what would make Jim's jeans even happier/luckier......

Reviewer: hoosier Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2007 07:30 pm Title: And time yet for a hundred indecisions

I really, really love this.  Thanks for the great read!  Can't wait for the next chapter (really can't wait).

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