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Reviewer: Tuna Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28, 2008 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ok, this piece was hilarious. Really, really hilarious. And somehow sexy, too. Well done! You somehow managed to perfectly capture not only the characters but also the particular and unique ways these characters would get nasty. I'm seriously impressed.

Reviewer: Spookster831 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05, 2007 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awesome!  Especially Michael/Jan and Dwangela.

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14, 2007 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

Haha, this was fun and occasionally disturbing. Jan/Michael was fantastic - Meredith and Creed was SO odd, and yet, entirely believable for those two...

Author's Response: Ha! Trust me- I was highly disturbed with myself while writing the Creed scene.  But Meredith needed to get laid, and Creed was just the guy to help her out.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: takemyhandx Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 14, 2007 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hahah too good! I wish you had a part w/ pam and jim too....but it's all good <3

Author's Response: I thought about having a Jim/Pam bit, but ultimately decided that I wanted to keep this completely light- full of meaningless nookie.  And with Jim and Pam... well that would never be meaningless!  Glad you liked it, and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: SaveTheReceptionist Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14, 2007 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

Good stuff. So funny. More please?

Author's Response: I love your screen name!  One of my favorite Office moments. Ever.  We need some that for the end of season three.  Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Rowena666 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14, 2007 09:45 am Title: Chapter 1

Excellent. Everyone's voices are perfect. I love how Michael kept quoting from movies and giggled when Jan touched him- that's so Michael! The Creed/'Mary Beth' thing was hilarious, but this was my favorite line:
“KELLY,” he said sternly, “FOR THE LAST TIME, just... don’t call it Little Ryan, okay?”

She grinned. “Big Ryan?”

“Well... that’s better...”


Author's Response: Thanks!  I love Ryan & Kelly.  Their love will stand the test of time.

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14, 2007 08:23 am Title: Chapter 1

Hilarious, you really nailed the way the characters would nail each other.  Great stuff.  

Author's Response: I just laughed ridiculously loud.  Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: secondrink Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13, 2007 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

Um, I almost sprayed water all over my laptop when Angela compared Dwight to Brian Boitano.  You should really have a "no beverages while reading" disclaimer :)

Author's Response:

Ha!  Sorry about almost ruining your laptop, but I'm so happy you enjoyed it!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: uncgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13, 2007 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

I just laughed my socks off!  (or something it's late)  This was so much fun and frankly just what I needed (what does that say about me).  Good job and very original idea!

Author's Response: Thanks!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it.  I think we can all use a little meaningless fun these days.  ;o)

Reviewer: Anoel Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13, 2007 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

I LOVE this! The Michael/Jan part was amazing and hot and funny and SO CUTE with the movie quotes. Great characterization there. And everything else was great too especially Dwight and Angela. Great work! (write more)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I love Michael/Jan, but for me, Michael is the hardest character to write.  I'm happy to hear I didn't totally butcher his character!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Maybe Once Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13, 2007 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, excellent....naughty workday hijinx......And the best of all the naughty has GOT to be Dwight and Angela, who are just so perfect in there bizarre perversity......Yeay!

Author's Response: So happy you liked it, as your saucy comment about an orgy was the inspiration!

Reviewer: Kathrynann Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13, 2007 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

Michael quoting Notting Hill? Dwight graceful like Brian Boitano? Little Ryan?! So funny!  Good job!

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it!  A Brian Boitano reference is always funny though, so I can't really take credit for that one.  ;o)

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13, 2007 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, yeah.  This is nice.  But lama, this is not fluff.  This is... well, at the very least it's steam.  Maybe smut.  And we could all use more steam and smut, so thank you.

I love Dwight's not so subtle hints that he'd be willing to do this in other places of the office, too!

Ooh, and thanks for the Darryl.  We all love Darryl. 

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed the steamy smut!  He he!  The Darryl/Hot Girl pairing was my favorite one to write.  I adore Darryl.

Reviewer: Jen74 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 13, 2007 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

Okay, you need to drink and write every day.  Your characterizations are spot on.  Michael's movie quoting was just hilarious, and I loved hearing how just plain horny Jan is.  Love anything having to do with Darryl.  Creed and Meredith, good stuff.  I really love Kelly and Ryan, and I know he loves her, I just know it.  And finally, Dwangela.  That was perfect.  Above the sweater action! 

Author's Response: Aw, thanks!  I pretty sure my liver would end up hating me though.  Ryan absolutely loves Kelly.  You can see it all over his face in Branch Closing.  And as for the above the sweater vest action- you can chalk that up to me not aving the cahones to undress Dwight.  *Shudder*  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 13, 2007 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

omg. the dwight/angela one SLAYED me. brian boitano. omg. you win.

Author's Response:

Brian Boitano would totally be Angela's type!  Especially in light of her recent... chemistry?  With Oscar.  Thanks for the review!

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