10 [Report This]Date: March 17, 2007 04:50 pm Title: These Things Take Time
Good stuff. Too bad you couldn't have been a writer for the show last fall. Very realistic.
10 [Report This]Date: March 17, 2007 04:13 pm Title: These Things Take Time
Hey this is lovely! I loved it, very realistic! Like I said last chapter, I wish this happened! =)
10 [Report This]Date: March 17, 2007 01:00 pm Title: These Things Take Time
Very cute! I was chanting to myself "tell him...kiss him!" lol Update soon!!
Date: March 17, 2007 12:30 pm Title: These Things Take Time
You are off to a good start. I tihnk you've captured the characters well. Looking forward to reading more from you!
Date: March 17, 2007 12:22 pm Title: These Things Take Time
this = awesome. i loved this chapter. both of them just need a little shove, and then they can both be happy. awesome
8 [Report This]Date: March 17, 2007 11:28 am Title: These Things Take Time
Oh, if only....I really like this, but it makes me sad too. I cannot wait to read the next chapter.
Date: March 17, 2007 11:06 am Title: These Things Take Time
Wow -- you are really making me sad that they didn't go for coffee! Damn Michael! Damn Karen!
Date: March 17, 2007 11:05 am Title: These Things Take Time
Very nice! I could definitely see them skirting around the issues a bit like this.
Author's Response: A fast review! I'm still cleaning up the chapter a bit! But thanks! I definitely don't think they'd be too forward... even though that's how it usually goes down in fics. But I'm still trying to keep this relatively short so we'll see ;)