Reviews For What Almost Wasn't
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Reviewer: bkwrm Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2009 09:42 am Title: Chapter 1

Another great story from you. The perfect blend of angst, fluff, and romance. Pam's dream seemed too real and it almost hurts me to read that it could have happened. But alas, Jim and Pam are happily married with a daughter. I love that Jim reassures Pam after her dreams. So sweet!

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2007 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

Woah, that was scary for a bit. But so worth the fear! Nicely done!

Reviewer: diddly day Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 30, 2007 03:05 am Title: Chapter 1

Honestly, this is probably one of my favorite stories by you.  I wondered if you were the same author who wrote 37, and a few other fics.  But I was suprised that you wrote this one.  You do a really great job of making Jim an asshole in some fics, and them making him the sweet teddy bear that we all know in love in other stories.  That's hard to do, and I'm very impressed.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 10:25 am Title: Chapter 1

well, i was going to leave a death threat, but i guess i won't now that you say you don't enjoy them.

first off, it would ave been a death threat if that hadn't been a dream.

and, then poor pam, still being unsure. but ya know, karen may be perfect on paper, but jim loves you pam. and he loves your daughter too *squee!* and so, jim is sweet and comforting her 

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2007 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

Thank God it was just a dream!  Whew!  You really had me going for a minute. As I read it I thought "how can this possibly have a happy ending?" but it did and I thank you for it! Very well done!!

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed 5 [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

First you break my heart by letting me think that Jim dumped Pam for Karen--then Pam wakes up. Then we get Pam sharing Jimbaby photos with Karen--surprise! Then this thing picks up steam like a runaway rollercoaster headed downhill until it kablams in that last wonderful line. :) Woohoo! I am not sure I am tall enough to ride this ride, but I sure loved it! Short and exciting.

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

Okay, somewhere before the reveal that it was Pam, I was predicting that it would be her and that that was the twist because we were supposed to expect that it was Karen, so I'm SO glad there was that second twist of it being a dream. It is still a little heartbreaking, though, that even after years with him, she still has these fears and doubts.

Reviewer: Joni24 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22, 2007 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

Phew, you really had me going! I was like "Why are you saying these things, Jim!?" and then I finished reading and then I felt like an ass, lol. You know you did a good job when you make someone feel like an ass...seriously, nice story.

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 22, 2007 08:23 am Title: Chapter 1

Whew.  I was wondering just what the hell I had gotten myself into until she woke up.  I really like it.  I think it's on the mark that even as Pam grows and even as she and Jim made a life together she would occasonally be haunted by her insecurities.  And I always enjoy little gilmpses of them together in the future.  Well done.  

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22, 2007 06:18 am Title: Chapter 1

First of all, you are fasterthansnakes, so death threats?  Futile.

I'm so GLAD this turned out to be a dream.  I certainly could see someone writing a story (and someone probably has) following through with that initial scenario, but that wouldn't be my favorite kind of story.  This, though?  Fantastic.

I really like the little description of the CFO party.  Karen has moved on, everyone is happy.  Jim tries to keep contact at a minimum, but it triggers this dream anyway.  Love Jim's way of dealing with the dreams and the description of their current life.

This is just lovely, fasterthansnakes.  Now that you've gotten it out here, you can return to your regularly scheduled program (life) for a few minutes... 

Reviewer: tizzy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2007 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

OH MY GOD DO NOT SCARE ME LIKE THAT! I knew reading it the broken hearted one was Pam, but still to read it? OH MY GOD! SO HAPPY IT WAS DREAM, if it weren't 1:30 I'd do a happy dance....I can see Pam definitly having these kinds of thoughts when they do get together...but I know Jim will be more than fine with his choices! :-)

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