9 [Report This]Date: April 24, 2007 02:30 pm Title: Find me
I've followed this story from the beginning although I only now registered at MTT. I really love this more and more after every new chapter. It's believable, not too rushed, everything moves nicely and there's that JAM-vibe that sometimes is lost on AU-fics. I cannot wait for more :)
Author's Response:
It really means a lot to me that you're taking the time to review my little fic!! Honestly, it's a little intimidating in here with all the AMAZING writers that post their stories.
Welcome to MTT!! (officially)
cheers.
--Lex
Date: April 09, 2007 08:18 pm Title: Find me
I don't think it's work so much as a common sense of humor and to be honest I see that is the tie that binds almost every relationship I know together. More soon please :)
Author's Response:
I do think that they have a common sense of humor, though often times I think Pam's might tend to be a lot darker than Jim's.
Anyway, thanks so much for reading! It really does mean a lot to me.
cheers.
--Lex
6 [Report This]Date: March 31, 2007 11:26 am Title: Find me
i'm liking this story, but i think you could probably use a beta ... you've got a few mistakes in here that sort of hinder the flow of the fanfic ... 'flurecent', 'your' instead of 'you', that kind of thing. nothing a little spellcheck and a helpful beta-friend couldn't fix :)
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm in the process of getting a beta. You're right about all those little typos that you tend to miss.
Thanks so much for the review!
cheers.
--Lex
10 [Report This]Date: March 28, 2007 05:49 pm Title: Find me
This is a really clever idea for a story-- Roy is/was so much a part of these two that without him we really can't assume anthing. Your dialog is VERY natural, very well written. Great work, keep it coming!
Author's Response:
I really do think that the dynamic between Jim and Pam is very easy, but Roy really was a a kind of barrier for that.
Also, I can't cut Roy out completely because he was such a big part of Pam's life for a long time. So I'm not done with him just yet...how that for hint? Hee.
Thanks so much for reviewing.
cheers.
--Lex
Date: March 23, 2007 04:56 pm Title: Find me
You sneak - I almost didn't even catch this! I really like it so far; this is an interesting premise. Loved the dialogue as well - I could just hear them both so clearly.
So...update soon!
Author's Response: GAH!! You reviewed my fic!!! (how's that for a switch?) I'm so flattered!!!
I love dialogue. I actually act out all of it before putting it down on paper (yes, I write the old fashioned way).
Seriously, I'm glad you like this.
More coming soon!
cheers.
--Lex
Date: March 23, 2007 04:46 pm Title: Find me
This is a great beginning. Can't wait to see where it goes!
Author's Response:
Thanks!!!
I can't wait to show you where it goes (I have it all planned out....)
cheers.
--Lex
9 [Report This]Date: March 23, 2007 09:40 am Title: Find me
Very interesting idea, Lex. Can't wait to see where you go with this!
Author's Response:
OMG, you reviewed my fic!!
I'm so flattered!
Yes, I think you're going to like it. It's just...fluff for the most part. *grins* Because the show itself is giving us NOTHING. *cries*
cheers.
--Lex
Date: March 23, 2007 08:27 am Title: Find me
Color me intrigued. I love AUs in all my fandoms. Don't know why. I do love fics that branch off from canon too, but AU fics really showcase the author's creativity and I love to see that.
I'm rambling, I know. I can't wait to see where Jim and Pam run into each other next. Without work between them, it'll be an interesting (and original) journey to see them come together.
More, please!
Author's Response:
I love A/Us too. They are so much fun. Some of them can really be way out there, and those are great, but I don't think I'm going to have Jim and Pam run off and try to be the next American Idol or something.
Thanks so much!
cheers.
--Lex
Date: March 23, 2007 04:48 am Title: Find me
I'm liking where you're going with this!!! It seems sometimes like the two things they have in common are Dunder Mifflin and a great sense of humour - and it's always troubled me that these two, who've said they're the best of friends, probably never did anything after work together at all. And how can they be best friends that way?
So I love the idea. I can't wait to see where you're going with this!
And that's why I shall not, shall not, be moving from this seat here until you get a new chapter up. Unless I need to pee or get something to eat. ...or be productive. oO Okay.
Author's Response:
Wow!! Thanks so much for the review!
And you're right, I've always been bothered by the fact that they're supposedly "best friends", but they don't even know each other's families. Or anything outside of work. I'm just wondering what they could possibly have in common that could keep them together.
And hey, you know you could always wear those astronaut diapers, right? And two words for you: home delivery.
hee. Thanks again for reviewing. And you will get something more from me soon. I promise (but I'm @ work right now...shh, don't tell.).
cheers.
--Lex
Date: March 22, 2007 09:54 pm Title: Find me
so excited to see where you go with this. I really enjoy A/U's, don't know why but they are a breath of fresh air after watching those two go around in circles. Hope for more soon!
Author's Response:
OMG, thank you so much!!! My first review!!!
I'm so horribly addicted to praise. I really enjoy A/Us as well. I hope you enjoy this. I get a little intimidated around here with all the wonderful authors.
Thanks again!
cheers.
--Lex