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Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2006 04:05 am Title: Chapter 2

*gasp* Is Pam on the move? Yay!

Author's Response: Maybe? ;)

Reviewer: Pixel Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2006 01:08 am Title: Chapter 2

I'm a little hurt that you've been hiding this stuff from us. Now that your cherry is popped (ooh, did I say that out loud?) I hope you'll continue to let us see more of your work. Great job!

Author's Response: I will. I just had to build a bit of courage.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2006 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 2

This is very nicely done. You capture the sadness of it all very well.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2006 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 2

Chapter 2 is awesome. I loved reading Pam's POV, especially these last two lines: "Happiness would not be hers until she actually made an attempt to grab it. It was a scary thought, but she knew she would always regret it if she didn’t try." Really looking forward to chapter 3.


Author's Response: Thank you very much. :) I will get cracking on the rest!

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