8 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2006 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 3
Yay Morning Angel :) And can I say how loud I laugh whenever Mark walks in on them in a fic? Every time! Comedy gold.
Author's Response: Yes! Mark makes for a fun tension breaker.
10 [Report This]Date: July 23, 2006 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 3
I loved this: "Jim felt his stomach start to contract. “Pam…Don’t do this, okay? I know you feel bad, but you can’t keep doing this to me… I can’t handle this anymore…" I can see Jim saying that to her. I loved the happy ending.
Author's Response: Thank you. I love having Jim finally try to confront her about it all. And yes, I am a sucker for happy endings, even if I tend to like writing angsty stuff.
8 [Report This]Date: July 23, 2006 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 3
YAY for Brave Pam. I love her when she's written as a smarty who realizes what's in front of her before it's too late. And that last paragraph? Methinks there's a hint that you may have a future in smutfic.
That's my professional opinion anyway. ;) Great job!
Author's Response: Yes, my next endeavour is a little more risqué. ;)
9 [Report This]Date: July 23, 2006 08:34 am Title: Chapter 3
This is really nice. I love the moment with Mark popping in- it breaks the tension for Jim and Pam and also the reader. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!