9 [Report This]Date: August 20, 2008 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 5
LMFAO Creed, oh classic chapter!
10 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2006 12:57 am Title: Chapter 5
hehe, creed and jan eh??
Author's Response:
Can you just imagine? Blech!
10 [Report This]Date: August 06, 2006 09:17 am Title: Chapter 5
Very clever and fun - especially liked Creed's perspective (love his reference to 'the young salesman with the hair.')
Author's Response:
Thank you! Writing from Creed's perspective flowed easily out of my head (oh, that's scary thought!)
10 [Report This]Date: August 06, 2006 03:54 am Title: Chapter 5
HAHAHA! These last 2 chapters were freaking hilarious. Creed is so creepy and you captured him PERFECTLY. Of all the people to overhear....KELLY??? LOL! Love it.
Author's Response: Thank you for the awesome comments!
Date: August 06, 2006 12:14 am Title: Chapter 5
Chapters 4 & 5 were both great. You really captured Kelly and Creed's voices. A pleasure to read.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 05, 2006 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 5
Hahahaha. "The young salesman with the hair" cracks me up. And so did Creed calling Dwight, Dwayne. Hysterical.
Author's Response: Thanks! Creed was a riot to write!