1 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2020 02:09 am Title: Executive Decisions
Oh, em, gee. The sheer volume of show-stopping zingers in this one chapter was astounding.
I'm surprised it doesn't increase Dunder Mifflin's insurance premiums to have something that alcohol-soaked above a paper warehouse.
This is turning into the sexual equivalent of the Donner party.
We are in the paper business in the twenty-first century. Foresight isn't our strong point.
And the hand squeeze at the end? The “favorite pen” ploy? Oh so VERY Jam. As always, your instinct for the characters is flawless. Hearty appreciation from, like, 13 years after you wrote this, lol.
10 [Report This]Date: June 11, 2008 06:03 pm Title: Executive Decisions
"If this were Friends, he's be Gunther" THis is AMAZING! I've just laughed my head off harder than i have over any fic. Awesome characterization of all the guys, and I LOVE CREED
10 [Report This]Date: April 14, 2007 06:35 pm Title: Executive Decisions
Holy cow that was some good stuff! Clever concept, great characterization, lots of laughs, and some fluffy goodness. Could hardly ask for more than that. Tremendous work.
Author's Response: Hey, thanks.
Date: April 14, 2007 05:58 am Title: Executive Decisions
I really love the line This is turning into the sexual equivalent of the Donner party. It's so clever, but not *too* clever to be authentic to Toby.
And, of course, the rest of it was a happyfun read! Thanks for this.
Author's Response: You're welcome. Toby went to California Coastal College, he's a clever guy. :)
Date: April 13, 2007 10:47 pm Title: Executive Decisions
This line was hilarious: "We are in the paper business in the twenty-first century. Foresight isn't our strong point."
I loved it and even though Jim screwed it up in the beginning, it still worked out. Yay!
Date: April 13, 2007 08:38 pm Title: Executive Decisions
OK, I had already reviewed this not realizing it was the final chapter. I don't pay attention sometimes. ;) Loved it.
Author's Response: It's fine, thanks. I think I broke my brain wrapping it up.
Date: April 13, 2007 08:26 pm Title: Executive Decisions
Creed! I have a feeling that adding Katy the purse girl to the equation instead of Meredith would get very different results! You're a guy, Swedge, so you'll have to tell me if I'm right - would everyone choose to vanquish/kill Meredith and court/boff Katy?
You have an error (/Freudian slip?) in this line "She's a great person but I've known for a while now that she's right for me in the long run." I'm guessing you mean "she's not right for me..."
I love Pam's emails at the end to Jim, especially "I periodically thought of you, of us, in terms of the first option. And there were a few times, like at around 1:15 this afternoon, where I thought of you in terms of the last option."
I've really enjoyed this.
Author's Response: Thanks.
Date: April 13, 2007 07:29 pm Title: Executive Decisions
The is Meredith a natural redhead reminded me of that video from Sexual Harrasment. Haha!
I love how Oscar is the sane one with "didn't you see this coming"
Yes, actually, Angela would be glad she was chosen to die.
Some things change, but Jim's feelings for Pam don't :)