9 [Report This]Date: April 06, 2007 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Your Dwight was so perfect! I love that when Jim didn't seem happy with Karen's hug that he first thought he was gay! And it was so sweet that he pretended to guard the prizes so he could stay close to Pam. He has such a big heart hidden behind his quirky bravada. Great job!
Date: April 01, 2007 10:21 am Title: Chapter 1
This is just wonderful. I love everyone's take on the Jim and Pam thing. I think the Ryan section was my favorite, especially how he doesn't tell Kelly (good choice, Ryan!) and how he throws Jim's snarky comment back at him. Awesome.
Date: April 01, 2007 08:50 am Title: Chapter 1
this is good. you've gt the characterizations down, plus it is a really interesting look at their relationship
Date: April 01, 2007 08:46 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw. Really nice, especially Angela and Dwight.....
Date: April 01, 2007 01:39 am Title: Chapter 1
It's not at all possible to get across how much I adore this story. Seriously. Everything, everything, was perfect - Angela set the tone perfectly, Phyllis was brilliant because we all know she knows, Toby was a little sad, but still I loved how you made it reasonable that he still wants her with Jim - better than her not being with anyone at all, loved Ryan because he's mean and so very much like his character on the show, nowadays.
And Dwight was perfect on all counts - everything he says, does, even the narrative is so innately Dwight it's mildly scary. I adored how he realises, how he looks away, and he doesn't use the material for blackmail even though it's unbelievably good stuff. I loved him handing her the Easter bunny like it's some kind of peace offering, like the handkerchief in Back from Vacation, and how he stays beside her because he thinks it is what Jim would want him to do - simply marvellous. I love Dwight, and I love how you got him in this story.
I loved this as a whole, really, everything about it! And I sincerely think Dwight and Angela as bookends are the best and most perfect of the lot. Absolutely lovely/brilliant/awesome/etc.. I'm going to have to read this again, now.
Date: March 31, 2007 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
i like this. well written - very accurate descriptions of how the other employees probably feel about jam. i like dwight at the end. good old dwight - total weirdo but deep down nice guy
Date: March 31, 2007 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
the end just killed me. I love when dwight is protective of Pam, you can tell that he does genuinely like her and I'm sure Angela has shared with him how kind she has been about their 'situation'. Ugh. Karen. Must. Go.