Date: August 21, 2008 10:54 pm Title: Two
Oh, just break my heart...fine. Beautiful writing with all the tension and memories making things awkward.
10 [Report This]Date: June 10, 2008 01:02 am Title: Two
Woah woah wait a minute. Jim and Pam married other people in this one? Now that will just not do!
It was nicely written, though. ;)
Reading on...
Date: September 04, 2007 10:00 am Title: Two
*sigh* Ah, what might have been. That was a lovely chance meeting.
Date: April 04, 2007 06:58 am Title: Two
this is great even though its not jim/pam babies. i felt so sorry for both jim and pam at the first one, the crying in the car. and then meeting in the hospital here. gah! poor jim. poor pam!
Author's Response: I know, these two crazy kids! And don't worry, there will be Jim/Pam babies aplenty. :-)
Date: April 03, 2007 11:35 pm Title: Two
Oh, weep! That was so bittersweet. My heart was just aching for Jim.
Author's Response: Bittersweet is one of my favorite emotions to write- thanks for the reviews!
Date: April 03, 2007 11:24 pm Title: Two
I'm one of those people who normally skips Pam pregnant stories but I'm so glad I read this! So unique. so ready to read some more..
Author's Response: While I love the fluff, sometimes I like the non-fluff, too. I'm glad you like it!
Date: April 03, 2007 08:38 pm Title: Two
I'm really enjoying this story so far, great job! I actually really enjoy how it's not just a Pam/Jim baby everytime (although you've gotta have couple!), and this:
he feels a strange sadness because there was a time where he couldn't get this image out of his head, for all it promised of the future
and this:
the part of him that wishes he could just erase a decade and go back in time scares him
made me tear up a little. The thing that upsets me most in fic (and in life) is that feeling of nostalgia and regret and lost chances - and you've captured that really nicely. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
10 [Report This]Date: April 03, 2007 08:36 pm Title: Two
GAH.. this is even more depressing than the first! and i STILL love it!
Author's Response: Hee, thanks!
Date: April 03, 2007 07:47 pm Title: Two
Sigh... more grief bone punching.
Good job!
Author's Response: Ha! That's an aweosme way of putting it, thanks!
Date: April 03, 2007 07:41 pm Title: Two
Heartbreaking! But still really good! Can't wait for the rest!
I love your Jim, sad but happy, supportive and loving no matter what.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I do love the Jim...
Date: April 03, 2007 07:34 pm Title: Two
Wow. This is so sad, yet I love it. I think you know that I can't handle too much sad when it comes to these two, so how about some nice fat Jam babies soon? Please?
In all seriousness, this was VERY well done and I am proud of you!
Author's Response: Thank you, Ray! The Jam babies will be the fattest and the cutest, don't you worry....
Date: April 03, 2007 07:08 pm Title: Two
Those first two stories are so good. It's interesting to consider all the roads Pam's life could lead to. Looking forward to the other possible Pams!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you for the blue ribbon! It means so much to me that it's nutty! I love thinking of how their lives could intertwine and diverge.
Thanks for the review!
Date: April 03, 2007 07:04 pm Title: Two
Back in time! Back in time!
Hey, where's my Jambaby? Didn't you promise me a Jambaby? Didn't you swear on a stack of Bibles there'd be a Jambaby? What? My imagination? Yeah... it's pretty good.
Author's Response: Hee, I promise for real!
Date: April 03, 2007 07:03 pm Title: Two
Oh I expected mindless fluff but this is sooooooooooo much better. More please!
Really- love it! Great job
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll be writing the next part tomorrow, so you won't have to wait too long!
Date: April 03, 2007 06:52 pm Title: Two
i need the other three right now! i thought it would be like five ways she puts a note in his lunchbox but this is way more exciting! love it
Author's Response: You'll get the other three as fast as I can write them! I'm going to be the best employee ever this week.
Thanks for reviewing!