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Reviewer: Strider Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2008 10:57 pm Title: Three

Triplets! That would be so awesome! I can see the two of them in the middle of that kind of chaos and loving it! YAY!!

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 01:06 am Title: Three

Aww, this is very real. =] Can't wait to read the next one!

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2007 10:05 am Title: Three

That was beautiful and brought tears to my eyes!  Even though I don't have personal knowledge of difficulty conceiving (quite the contrary, heh) I'm really glad that you gave them this issue to deal with.  Poor Jim, carrying around that self-guilt.

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 11:20 pm Title: Three

Love it! So different, but still so them!

Author's Response: Thanks, that's exactly what i was going for!

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 10:56 pm Title: Three

sounds pretty accurate to me!! and holy cow, three times? just imaging the cost is making my wallet hurt. this of course, is my favorite, because i love happy JAM, and i love triplets, the cutest babies i've taken care of were triplets. *sigh*

Author's Response: Thanks! I figured torturing them in the first two stories deserved triplets in the third part!

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 10:55 pm Title: Three

SQUEE!

Author's Response: Hahhaha, thanks for my first squee ever! I take it you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 09:51 pm Title: Three

This made me a little teary.  Thanks for the sweetness!

Author's Response: Aw, you're welcome, and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: WildBerryJam Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 08:47 pm Title: Three

"They just needed to take their time. They just needed a little push, like we did"

OK, those two need more than a little push, they need a flying leap off a cliff to get those two together! 

Anyhoo, I love love love these!  The first two break my heart and this one did too, but in a much better way.  It's so touching and lovely.  I'm also glad you brought up in-vitro because it's not writen about alot.  I can't wait for the last 2!!! :)



Author's Response: Thanks, WildBerryJam! I'm having fun exploring lots of diffrent ideas, so I'm so glad you like it!

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 07:23 pm Title: Three

I love this.  I must say I really enjoy how non sappy you made it, which is usually my issue with pregnancy fics.  He had told her in the car, "Third time's the charm, Pam" and her retort was, "Well, three strikes and we're out," which was so unlike her, but he felt the same anxiety. That just made me so sad for them.  I'm looking forward to the 2 remaining parts!

Author's Response: I try REALLY hard to tone down the sap, so thanks for the compliment! I'm so glad you like it!

Reviewer: secondrink Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 06:52 pm Title: Three

Yeah Discovery Health...best channel ever!  But sidenote I don't think that I could take it if JAM couldn't conceive...that would completely blow.  I am also one of the people who thought "Oh, cutesy JAM story" from the title but am very pleasantly surprised by the variety and great writing that I found instead! :)

Author's Response: I kind of like the thought that not everything is easy for these two, but then I remember they're not real, and then I can go on with my day and do a lot of writing! I'm glad you were surprised!

Reviewer: Weetzie Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 06:41 pm Title: Three

Aww...I love these! I thought they were all going to be fluffy, but I'm glad they aren't. The sadness of the second one made the third one even better!


Author's Response: Yeah, I wanted to go with the non-fluff, since I am normally a peddler of cheese. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 06:35 pm Title: Three

Oh this is beautiful.  I loved the first two as well - because they are incredibly realistic - but gotta say this one is my favorite so far.  Well of course it would be!

Can't wait for 4 and 5!!



Author's Response: I'm working on 4 and 5 today, so there should be some posted later today!
Thanks!

Reviewer: thedominantmalekitty Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 05:09 pm Title: Three

Tears in my eyes, friend.  I love this. Love, love, love!

"They just needed a little push, like we did" = the perfect thing for Pam to say to Jim. 

I know at work you have important tasks involving Target and scheduling people flights and lots of other stuff I don't understand, but how bout you forget about all that for a while and get this done for me.  You know you want to...



Author's Response: Thank you, rayray!  Work will definitely be shuffled about so that I can do a little sneaky writin' today.
Thanks for the compliments!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 05:05 pm Title: Three

Yay!  This is my favorite so far (big surprise, right?).  This is my favorite line: "Her eggs might be released erratically, but his sperm refuse to swim at all."  That's really good!

Imagine 3 Jambabies coming into Dunder-Mifflin to visit.  Yikes!  Put away the Foreman Grill and lock up the paper clips, the Halpert triplets are coming in! 

Love it. 



Author's Response: Ha! Thanks! That would be a great episode!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 04:25 pm Title: Three

That was so incredibly sweet - I felt so bad for Jim because you know he feels like he's let her down (though of course it's NOT his fault)!  I loved the other two chapters, but I'm too much of a Jam fan to feel totally happy that she wasn't pregnant by Jim in the other two!!  Really looking forward to 4 and 5, though I fear you'll find other fathers!  (no!!!!)

:-) 



Author's Response: Don't worry too hard! I felt horrible about her not being with Jim in the first two, and I wrote the bloody thing!. Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 04:08 pm Title: Three

she's pregnant!!!!!! :) *huge grin*

is it wrong how much i care about fictional characters - or in this case fictional fictional characters!? 



Author's Response: Story of my life, Jess. Story of my life.

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