5 [Report This]Date: August 31, 2008 08:08 am Title: You Couldn't Quite Discern Me
i never read this when it was first posted, but i really like it. i think that in each section, there's a little bit of the other man glaring at her while in the moment. i like when jim is written realistically - he's not a perfect guy and we all need to recognize that! in fact i think it makes him better. and, also, roy is not evil. well done!
6 [Report This]Date: April 12, 2007 06:33 pm Title: You Couldn't Quite Discern Me
he’s too gentle, and she can’t stand it.
Thank you for not making Jim such a girl. :)
Date: April 09, 2007 08:32 pm Title: You Couldn't Quite Discern Me
Well done. :) I would definitely think the sex would have been one of the best parts of the Pam/Roy relationship, given what (little) we saw of their happiness together on the show.
Date: April 09, 2007 03:40 am Title: You Couldn't Quite Discern Me
Oh, this is lovely. I think it's a nice realistic comparison. It's also a sign that this inability for them to express how they feel could continue into the relationship - this problem could probably be fixed if Pam would just sit Jim down and have a talk with him, "You know, I'd really like it if you were a little rougher, a little faster" but that's just not her way, and he won't catch on until she tells him explicitly.
Date: April 09, 2007 12:15 am Title: You Couldn't Quite Discern Me
Very, very, VERY good. Your writing is beautiful and I love this glimpse into Pam's thoughts about the two of them. I also think it's realistic, the way you portray each of them acting with Pam. I'm sort of in love with this story.
10 [Report This]Date: April 08, 2007 07:14 pm Title: You Couldn't Quite Discern Me
= ) . Speechless & that's a good thing. Good work!
Date: April 08, 2007 04:33 pm Title: You Couldn't Quite Discern Me
Wow. That's pretty much all I got. Maybe I'll do better in future reviews.
Date: April 08, 2007 04:04 pm Title: You Couldn't Quite Discern Me
I'm starting to love you. Your stuff really keeps it real, I mean come on Pam can't want sugar and adoration all the time, no woman does. I have a feeling that after a few years though Dirty!Jim will emerge (once he's sure enough of himself with her) Now THAT would be a sequel I would love to read. Just a though.
Date: April 08, 2007 03:55 pm Title: You Couldn't Quite Discern Me
That was a refreshing change. I mean, not that I don't love all the other fics, but after The Negotiation, I kind of don't want to see Roy as a villain so much.
Although I have to say, I think Pam could get Jim to be a little naughty. He's sweet, but I know there's an edge there somewhere. :)