10 [Report This]Date: April 23, 2007 12:34 am Title: Chapter 7: Mess Hall
Love it! Definitely, definitely love it!
Date: April 22, 2007 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 7: Mess Hall
Like it!
I especially like all the Talking Heads! Classic!
Date: April 22, 2007 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 7: Mess Hall
Oh, the talking heads at the beginning of this chapter FTW! And Jim reassuring Pam was the cutest/sweetest thing ever. :)
Date: April 22, 2007 10:15 am Title: Chapter 7: Mess Hall
The Bible says to ‘Love thy neighbor.’ Angela’s eyes narrowed. Michael was not God’s neighbor when that rule was implemented.
Best talking head ever.
Date: April 22, 2007 08:32 am Title: Chapter 7: Mess Hall
Haha! A great Oscar thought to start the chapter!!!
Actually, all of those thoughts are just hilarious and in character and so funny!
Biting a popscile? nearly gave me brain freeze just thinking about it....
:D. Pam pranking Jim. Them talking and playing... how could anyone hate it?
Date: April 22, 2007 06:56 am Title: Chapter 7: Mess Hall
Love it... Need more!
Date: April 22, 2007 06:54 am Title: Chapter 7: Mess Hall
there were at least 6 opportunities during this exchange where one of them should have kissed the other, 'let me see your tongue?' ha, 'let me feel your tongue' should be more like it. Keep going, this is really a fun story although I'm sad boot camp is over :)
Date: April 22, 2007 05:20 am Title: Chapter 7: Mess Hall
Like it? How about LOVE it?!? Those opening talking heads are absolutely hysterical, especially Angela's and Creed's. And it is so perfect to have everyone miserable and then have Michael assume that everything is hunky/dory.
And it was very nice to see Jim and Pam making some progress themselves. Maybe there's a great underlying symbol to this story that hasn't been considered yet: they're at "basic" training, getting back to the basics of their relationship. Talking, joking, being honest.
Okay, rambling a bit. Excellent work, as usual!