8 [Report This]Date: May 09, 2009 06:45 pm Title: Well, that was easy
Wow, what a perfect title for this chapter. But then, you wrote the chapter and the title, so of course it is. This was a perfect break-up. Ding dong, Karen's gone. Or, at least broke up with.
10 [Report This]Date: May 09, 2009 12:15 pm Title: Well, that was easy
Awww I like this Karen, but yayy they broke up :)
Date: April 15, 2007 07:22 pm Title: Well, that was easy
Wow...Jim and/or Pam definitely needs a kick in the pants and I love that it's going to be Jim's guardian angel that does it. Can't wait to see where this goes!
Author's Response: Oh yes, Clarence is a pants kicker. Ha, does tha tmakes sense? It sounded weird. Anyway thanks for reading!
Date: April 13, 2007 07:33 pm Title: Well, that was easy
I'm not sure I believe that Karen would be somewhat happy about breaking up. If that were the case, why would she: a) put in for 2 transfers; b) say she'd redact both transfers; and c) talk about a long distance relationship?
That said? Anything that gets the two of them broken up, I'm happy with!
Oh, but boo for no Clarence in this chapter. I really like Clarence. Does he have his wings yet in your story? And please tell me that Jim will at some point lasso the moon for Pam. Although he may want to come up with a different thing to do - lasso the moon is corny, and has "been done", right? Now I'm going to be thinking about another kind of thing to say you'll do that conveys the same feeling. Darn it!
Anyway, when the next chapter is up, I'll be there.
Author's Response: I hope you read this latest chapter beause it explains it a bit more. The fact that it seemed so unrealiztic was done on purpose to show how much control the angels can have. Anyway, I'm glad you are still liking it!
Date: April 13, 2007 02:37 pm Title: Well, that was easy
Encouraging words huh? Like: Woo-hoo Karen's gone, Jim and Pam can get together, the universe will align and all will be right with my world! So...did it work? Cuz I can't wait for more!
Let me know if you need beta help, I have no life so I should be around all weekend.
Author's Response: I plan on writting again tomorrow, I'll definetly send it your way.
Date: April 13, 2007 01:44 pm Title: Well, that was easy
Now that Karen is out of the way, I am totally excited to see where you take this. I love Clarence!
Author's Response: I wish Karen would leave for real on the show, now that would be exciting!
Date: April 13, 2007 12:50 pm Title: Well, that was easy
Good for Jim to try to make things right. The conversation seemed a little rushed, but I really like how you inclulded Jim's thoughts. Looking forward to more of this story!!!
Author's Response: The rush actually is on purpose. It will be explained in the next chapter. Let's just say Clarence has a hand in a lot of things that Jim does and things that happen to him.
Date: April 13, 2007 12:22 pm Title: Well, that was easy
write faster. i just got into this story, and (yay an update so quickly), and I don't want a break.
i love reasonable karen. i also love angry karen. actually, i love any karen when she ends it with jim and jim and pam can be happy. :)
Author's Response: I love that you read this as soon as I posted almost as much as you love that I posted fast. Did that make sense? Anyway.... I'm so glad you are enjoying the story. Hopefully I wont keep you waiting too long.