7 [Report This]Date: March 23, 2008 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Although I'm late in reading this I still want to wish you a happy first story! This was cute - I love happy smoochy wedding love fluff.
Date: February 07, 2008 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I adore this story!! Sweeter than candy. =)
Date: April 21, 2007 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
this is such a great story, but i'm so sad that it's not continuing! any thoughts about adding to it? very well written & sweet. love it!
8 [Report This]Date: April 19, 2007 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
So cute! And while I didn't get drunk at my wedding, I did hang out by the coat rack for part of the night.
Date: April 19, 2007 11:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Very sweet--what a wonderful little story for a rerun Thursday! Keep up the great work! -CH
Date: April 19, 2007 06:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Michael dancing the chicken dance to Celebrate... thats Michael.
Such a sweet happiness!!!!
Only thing I would say, is you have it pretty well down. Most things come with practice, just making it flow a bit better.
8 [Report This]Date: April 19, 2007 05:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Nice, nice fluff. I'm not entirely convinced that I can hear show Jim calling anyone "baby"- but then again, couples do end up getting pretty schmoopy, so it isn't a big deal. Otherwise, I think you have the Pam and Jim voices just right, and I love the detail about her wanting to go through Mrs. Stanley's pockets. Great job!
Date: April 19, 2007 05:51 am Title: Chapter 1
absolutely precious! there's no better to start off writing fanfic than with sugary-sweet fluff. :)
Date: April 18, 2007 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
I never picked Jim as a sayer of "baby", but I still swooned. Lovely twist-yness that wasn't expected!
Date: April 18, 2007 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw! That was really sweet. Maybe get a beta reader next time, just to clean up the punctuation and dialogue attribution, but other than that little suggestion, I thought it was great. :)