Date: May 01, 2007 07:27 am Title: all your fault
this is literally cuter than a basket full of kittens (and since I have an angelaesque obsession with the creatures that is saying a LOT). I love how you wrote Jim, especially this line. "She couldn’t possibly be anymore scared than he was at the prospect of having found the love of his life at twenty-eight, and the rest of his natural life being a complete wreck if she didn’t return his feelings. That was true fear, and he had a feeling she had no clue what that was like."
I'm glad you're hooked on fanfic now because I can't wait to read more from you!
Date: May 01, 2007 05:38 am Title: all your fault
This had to be it, this had to work this time, or he was going to lose his mind.
Oh, these two break my heart. I love that they had a "real" first date here, and how much fun they had. You made this feel very realistic- low-key and quiet, but fraught with the underlying angst they bring so well. Great!