Date: August 08, 2007 07:32 pm Title: all your fault
I love this premise - that the only way to get to that first (second?) date was to have a non-date. Really well written!
Date: May 02, 2007 10:16 pm Title: all your fault
Okay, this is exactly how I want it to happen on the show. These two need this kind of honesty between them! Such a sweet story, and a lovely ending.
Date: May 01, 2007 07:42 pm Title: all your fault
Very cute story. I love when they have happy endings. And I also watch the Spiderman sagas for the Mary Jane and Peter interaction. Great job.
8 [Report This]Date: May 01, 2007 06:24 pm Title: all your fault
Actually, it's "all your fault" that I like this so much, because you do such a great job bringing us such happy smoochy JAM fluff. So sick of you - never!
9 [Report This]Date: May 01, 2007 10:20 am Title: all your fault
This was really really sweet :) I got chills, and they were good chills. I love your stories.
Date: May 01, 2007 07:27 am Title: all your fault
this is literally cuter than a basket full of kittens (and since I have an angelaesque obsession with the creatures that is saying a LOT). I love how you wrote Jim, especially this line. "She couldn’t possibly be anymore scared than he was at the prospect of having found the love of his life at twenty-eight, and the rest of his natural life being a complete wreck if she didn’t return his feelings. That was true fear, and he had a feeling she had no clue what that was like."
I'm glad you're hooked on fanfic now because I can't wait to read more from you!
9 [Report This]Date: May 01, 2007 05:38 am Title: all your fault
This had to be it, this had to work this time, or he was going to lose his mind.
Oh, these two break my heart. I love that they had a "real" first date here, and how much fun they had. You made this feel very realistic- low-key and quiet, but fraught with the underlying angst they bring so well. Great!