Date: May 14, 2007 07:03 pm Title: Lake Scranton
How dear -- Dwight once more offering support and a hanky. I loved it even before Jim showed up.
Date: May 12, 2007 10:07 pm Title: Lake Scranton
I really would like to see this bus trip.
Dwight is just so good here, and his mentions of Angela, and I love this: “ I should point out, though, that had we been attacked by a bear or a troop of ninjas, I would have surpassed you in bravery.” He was smiling now, as if he was in on every joke she had ever made at his expense.
Author's Response: I would too! Thanks again TLK!
Date: May 12, 2007 06:24 am Title: Lake Scranton
Love this whole story, but really love this chapter. I love that Dwight and Angela think Pam was brave and are sticking by her. and I love Dwight sticking up for Pam. And I'm glad Pam stuck to her guns even when Jim came back to talk to her. Very nice. Can't wait for the fifth part.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it. That look that Angela gave Jim during Pam's speech had me really wondering what she was thinking.
10 [Report This]Date: May 11, 2007 10:39 pm Title: Lake Scranton
That was awesome, and wasn't overdone.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Tasha!
Date: May 11, 2007 09:59 pm Title: Lake Scranton
Wow -- that is great. Damn I miss happy & friend-y Pam & Jim! This is the best chapter yet.
Author's Response: I miss them too! Thanks for your review!
Date: May 11, 2007 09:55 pm Title: Lake Scranton
dwight, i love you
seriously, this is so great, i love all of these
Author's Response: I love Dwight too. More so since he comforted Pam in the stairwell. Glad you like this.
Date: May 11, 2007 09:41 pm Title: Lake Scranton
Oh, snap. Jim's "That's what she said" was the perfect tension-breaker. I love this chapter.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for all of your reviews.
10 [Report This]Date: May 11, 2007 09:35 pm Title: Lake Scranton
Haha, how many times have I commented on this story now, three? :) I love it so much, and I love the role that you gave to Dwight in this one! So sweet.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked Dwight. He's such a sweetie underneath.
9 [Report This]Date: May 11, 2007 09:33 pm Title: Lake Scranton
Awww, Dwight and Angela to the rescue. I love the way you have Jim ask Dwight to move- the words sound like Jim to me.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm always glad to know that I got someone's voice right.