9 [Report This]Date: June 06, 2007 09:23 pm Title: The Confrontation
Really enjoying this whole story. Keep it up!
Date: May 16, 2007 05:29 pm Title: The Confrontation
I really loved this story. It felt true to all the characters, with great continuity but not the sort of sly winking that fans often slip into. The drunken kiss was adorable. Really excellent work--one of my favorite Office fics ever.
Author's Response: Wow. Thank you so very much for your kind words. I'm honored that you like this....really honored.
Date: May 16, 2007 04:56 pm Title: The Confrontation
this was awesome, I mean really fabulous. I loved the drunken kiss and how right Karen was about it not being about her. mad kudos
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Date: May 15, 2007 02:27 pm Title: The Confrontation
I would like to see 2-3 more chapters, hitting on them truly getting their friendship back, which Jim quickly segues into a quick, awkward invitation to dinner or something, and then them together a new couple.
You're doing a wonderful job! Can't wait for more.
Date: May 14, 2007 04:13 pm Title: The Confrontation
I'm really impressed with your writing. This is terrific so far. Love the way you write Karen and Pam, and their dialog. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words!
10 [Report This]Date: May 14, 2007 03:59 pm Title: The Confrontation
Terrific, really enjoyed this.
Author's Response: Thanks!
8 [Report This]Date: May 14, 2007 02:46 pm Title: The Confrontation
This is a really novel idea. To be honest, Pam and Karen talking things over never occurred to me, but it's a great idea. I'm enjoying reading this!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm so glad you are enjoying it.
10 [Report This]Date: May 14, 2007 11:54 am Title: The Confrontation
Yes! Karen who isn't a witch in fanfiction! Love it. ;D
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like it!
Date: May 14, 2007 11:41 am Title: The Confrontation
that's really great, and in my opinion exactly what karen should do. After watching Jim's face during Pam's confession it's obvious that Something is not over...I'd want to know all the facts too...
Bravo...don't stop till we get enough
Author's Response: I really think Karen would want to know what is going on and I think she probably realizes....after the half-truths he's told her, that Jim probably isn't the guy to ask. Thanks so much for your comments!
Date: May 14, 2007 08:44 am Title: The Confrontation
What Karen has to tell her will probably hurt, but hey…..tonight she’s already walked through fire. Woo! Yeah, I love this. It's a cliffhanger, but although I'd love to hear what comes next, I don't need to. The important thing here is Pam and who she has become. I love her plan for keeping her mind occupied on the bus, too. Fabulous. Love the details here. You really do a great job inhabiting our girl Pam.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I think I've had your comment in my head as I've been writing this, wondering if I've taken it too far or not far enough so I've become very aware of that. So...awesome feedback. Glad you think I've done okay with Pam.