Date: May 25, 2007 08:56 am Title: Chapter 5
Love this story. Everything for them is just so natural. I'm glad Karen came back and they were able to get past that chapter and onto another one....which I hope involves more lovin.
Date: May 22, 2007 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
i just have to tell you that i REALLY love this. how i wish the show could be like this haha. i guess that's why we have fanfic :) really though, good stuff.
Date: May 22, 2007 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 4
Very nice! This is making me feel very gruntled.
I especially like the little bit with everyone finding out about Ryan and how Jim and Pam catch each other up a bit on the time they missed together.
9 [Report This]Date: May 22, 2007 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 4
Aaah, I want this too! More, soon. Pretty please with a cherry on top.
Date: May 22, 2007 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
Go FNB. Tell him what you want right away. I love it.
Date: May 22, 2007 10:42 am Title: Chapter 4
Ooooooh! And now we get to the good stuff! Eeeeeee! I can't wait.
Oh and this chapter was great too. Loved that Pam brought him flowers. And Michael's pale, shaken reaction to Ryan's promotion. And Jim calling to check up on Karen was really in character because he really isn't a bad guy.
Well done. More, please!
Date: May 22, 2007 08:53 am Title: Chapter 3
"So, does tomorrow work for you?"
That is the most perfect line Jim could say.
10 [Report This]Date: May 21, 2007 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yeah, this story is awesome! I like how Jim is the ultimate gentleman on the first date!
8 [Report This]Date: May 21, 2007 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
I loved their first date. So cute and sweet and honest and serious at the same time. And another awesome last line.
Date: May 21, 2007 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 3
Absolutely it does.
I'm sorry, I thought I was supposed to answer the question. ;)
Nice date!
9 [Report This]Date: May 21, 2007 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 3
This story is just what i need right now, so thank you! Can't wait for more!
Date: May 21, 2007 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 3
Holy crap. This is getting steamy. I like it. A lot!
9 [Report This]Date: May 21, 2007 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Do I love this story? Absolutely I do.
BTW, yeah you for the speedy updates. We better get the next date soon.
Date: May 21, 2007 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great story! I haven't been back to MTT for a while, but this story will keep me coming back. You've really got a good idea here. Keep up the good work.
Date: May 21, 2007 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
The last line made me laugh so hard my stomach hurts. Ok it's been a long day but it just gave me a good chuckly
Date: May 21, 2007 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
oh, yay! Love this: "If he was coming back to Scranton, he might as well come all the way back" Crossing my fingers for a return to the DoL in S4.
8 [Report This]Date: May 21, 2007 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
Another awesome chapter - and I loved the last line - "Um, where do you live exactly?" Too funny! Can't wait to read the next chapter. (hint! hint!)
8 [Report This]Date: May 21, 2007 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great story. You did an awesome job with the conversation between Jim and Karen - it sounded so much like them. Poor Karen - planning a future and having sex the night before, and then getting dumped the next day. And I have to comment on the lines that everyone else seems to like too: "Karen, I can't just leave you here."
She turned and said, "You already have."
Awesome dialogue!
Date: May 21, 2007 11:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Well we can only hope that is how it went. I guess we have to wait 4 months to really find out.
Date: May 21, 2007 10:55 am Title: Chapter 1
I really like your explanation for Jim returning alone to Scranton:
She laughed bitterly and replied, "If you think that I am going to sit in a car with you for two and a half hours, you are... Just go, Jim. I'll find my own way back to Scranton."
"Karen, I can't just leave you here."
She turned and said, "You already have."
I think it is totally plausible she wanted nothing to do with him and she knew the whole drive would turn into a giant fight that would not resolve anything. Good job!
Date: May 21, 2007 09:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooh -- I really liked this 'you already have'. Excellent!
Date: May 21, 2007 09:33 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm loving these fics that show us what might have happened to the two of them- because I refuse to believe the just abandoned her there! Hee.
Great job- you capture her voice particularly well, and I think that's hard because we barely got to know her.
Date: May 21, 2007 09:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Good job. I definitely can see things going like this. I'm not sure why,but this line particularly struck me: Jim stood up. "I'm sorry. This is going to sound really weird, but... I have to take myself out of the running for this job. I don't belong here. At least... not... yet."