1 [Report This]Date: March 29, 2023 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
This fic is a melting pot of total adorableness.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'm sorry I just saw that you'd reviewed this one. I'm not around these parts that often anymore. I was so excited when he finally asked her on a date. A date! Oh, that joy. I hope I caught some of that happiness.
1 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2020 02:30 am Title: Chapter 1
This is a lovely look into their mindset at the beginning of their first date. But real talk: they keep going like that, that date is never getting out of Pam's apartment.
Author's Response:
Ha, there’s that. I always figured they took those first steps pretty slowly, though. Lots of baggage to unpack.
But oh, how exciting that first date must’ve been! I’m glad this caught that feeling for you.
10 [Report This]Date: November 23, 2008 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
that was so cute. Loved the line about Jim knowing that Pam was the one. very sweet!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! I don't know how I missed this comment, but I appreciate it!
Date: May 30, 2007 08:43 am Title: Chapter 1
"But when you know she is the one..."
Yeah, that line just did me in. Beesly isn't the only one showing off the honesty and courage. Hee.
Author's Response: He dumped his girlfriend and drove straight home from NYC. I think they're both done beating around the bush. At least, I hope so! Thank you so much!!
Date: May 29, 2007 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
whoa, short. i was surprised when i couldn't scroll. but so great... um... yeah, great. their date went perfectly in real fictional world. i am sure of it.
Author's Response: You have been gone a while if you forgot about my tendency to stop short! Hee. Thank you so much. I'm sure it was a little awkward, but perfect anyway.
Date: May 28, 2007 06:28 am Title: Chapter 1
If I didn't already review this shame on me. If I did - you deserve 2 reviews anyway. Thanks so much for this Lis. Lovely, sweet and perfect.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I am still just sort of basking in it, you know? A DATE! They're going on a date! YAY!
Date: May 24, 2007 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
"But when you know she is the one..."
When i read this, my tummy does funny things. This was absolutely lovely, so succinct and sweet.
Author's Response:
Yay, the tummy vote! Seriously, that's a very cool compliment- thank you! Glad you liked!
Date: May 24, 2007 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Since I can't just quote the entire story as my favorite part (hee!) I'm going to go with Pam changing "into clothes he'd never seen". Such a perfect touch.
Author's Response: Oooh, thank you! I figure Jim will like Pam's new blouse as much as you did...hee.
Date: May 24, 2007 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
I was about to copy and paste the first date statement of Jim's before I even read through the rest of this, but then I realized I only had a few short lines after that to read....great story, short but sweet!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, my fic is usually short- but I love that you think it was sweet!
10 [Report This]Date: May 24, 2007 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
*giggle* i like. *giggle*
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad to make you giggle! Hee.
Date: May 24, 2007 05:30 am Title: Chapter 1
As Martha Stewart would say, THIS is a good thing. A very good thing!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! Glad you liked.
Date: May 23, 2007 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
So perfectly succinct. Wondeful title, wonderful ending and all in between.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'm never sure about my titles, so I'm happy that worked for you!
10 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2007 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Amazing what you were able to say with so few words. Very well done.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Date: May 23, 2007 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Completely wonderful. I love really short fic, and you did an awesome job with it. So much fun to read!
Author's Response:
Oh, thank you! I tend to write really short fic, so I'm happy to know there is an audience for it. I had a great time writing this one because I'm so happy about this first date!
8 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2007 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
"But when you know she is the one..." What a beautifully romantic thing for him to say to her.
Author's Response: Yeah, I am not sure if our Jim is really this mushy, but I hope that finally being with the girl of his dreams brings it out in him. Thank you so much!
Date: May 23, 2007 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very sweet and I so could see Jim saying all that to Pam.
Author's Response: Oooh, thank you! I'm glad it seemed in-character to you!
8 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2007 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw, that's so cute. I love the idea of just having a little moment that's so them. Nice job!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! "So them" is a great compliment- because I love them! Glad you liked.
Date: May 23, 2007 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
You have ways of giving me butterflies in my stomach from such short stories. You are the master. I bow to you. :)
Author's Response:
*nods graciously* You may rise! Heee, kidding. Thank you so, so much!
Author's Response:
*nods graciously* You may rise! Heee, kidding. Thank you so, so much!
10 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2007 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Perfectly charming. I can see this as a cold open to the season 4 premiere; if I'm right, and you've predicted the future, we can look forward to a wonderful season. Great job with the dialogue and details; tihs is simply lovely. -CH
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed (I've only correctly predicted the future once in fic, and that was Pam leaving Phyllis's wedding with Roy, so...let's hope for better in season 4!).
Date: May 23, 2007 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well, to quote one M. Stewart...this is a good thing.
And this is the Jim I love (who was that impostor in the fancy suit anyway?)
Author's Response: Ah, Jim. Yeah, I love him, too. It'll be good for him to really, finally be back. Thank you!!
Date: May 23, 2007 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Short, simple, oh so sweet. Nicely done!
Author's Response:
Oooh, thank you! I think it will be very sweet for them, finally!
Date: May 23, 2007 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aieee!!! (That's what squee sounds like in my house) They are freaking adorable! Made my stomach flip a little, too.
Author's Response:
Wow, a squee/aieee? That's high praise. Thank you so much!
10 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2007 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sweet. and. Perfect!!! :-D
Author's Response: Thank you so mcuh! Perfect is...that's a nice thing to say.
8 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2007 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww....I just love Jim. This made me smile.
Author's Response: I love them both. I'm glad to make you smile!