Date: August 31, 2008 11:28 pm Title: The Final Act
Evil. I always felt bad for Karen... it kinda sucked the way they just left it, especially consider what a douche Jim was, to dump her the way he did. And it's why this story is just so deliciously perfect! I'm still a hardcore Jammer, but this is reality, and you wrote it very well! :) Keep it up!
Date: May 24, 2007 08:39 pm Title: The Final Act
Wow, Karen! I have to admit, before the reveal of the fake-out, I was getting pretty upset too, thinking, "NO! You cannot do that to my Karen!" So I was more relieved that she was okay than upset at what Jim and Pam must be going through. Can't even really blame her - revenge is sweet!
Author's Response: Don't worry -- she's my Karen too. Now that they used her up and discarded her so badly on the show, I don't think I could ever hurt her again in fiction.
Date: May 24, 2007 09:34 am Title: The Final Act
This was hard to read. I'm a huge Jammer, but I think both of them were a bit classless toward Karen. She deserves a little revenge, but this was sooooo harsh. Great story though. You're always breaking my heart a bit. I guess Im a glutton for punishment.
Date: May 23, 2007 04:23 pm Title: The Final Act
I really liked this! Andy's role in the charade was a perfect surprise, and I was thoroughly entertained by your imagery and the way you used the language to convey the story. My favorite lines, however, are these...
"She put that stupid little bear on her desk because it made her happy. Now the little bastard was staring at Jim, trying to ruin his sweet afterglow."
"Dunder Mifflin could go fuck itself."
This was a refreshing take on the now very popular post-"The Job" storyline. Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review. I'm so glad you keyed in on Karen's bear -- I like to get hung up on inane little details that illustrate bigger things.
Date: May 23, 2007 03:30 pm Title: The Final Act
Thank god that somebody wrote something this week that wasn't post-Job Jam fluff (I guess I should be thanking you. So thanks). I was beginning to think that this fandom wasn't ever going to have any other plot ever again.
Author's Response: Aah.. a like minded spirit. These are dark times for our kind indeed.
Date: May 23, 2007 03:07 pm Title: The Final Act
Wow she hits back REALLY hard. Thats my girl. And I see where you're coming from. I need to read stuff like this, even though its so gloomy, becuase makes me so sad how she got treated like such a doormat. I've been really selective what I've read since the last ep. so thanks for writing this.