awww- so sweet! I really hope that's how their first date went :D:D

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"That night...that was my very first kiss from anyone besides my mom, my dad, my grandparents, my aunt Linda, and Roy."

This is my favorite part, I think this is the whole crux of why Pam reacted the way she did to that kiss. Well done.

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Very sweet and romantic. Perfect even! Great story!

I loved every syllable of this!  It made me giddy and tear up.  Loved. It.

Honestly, so many people have written in their FDF's the little tidbit about how Jim says he won't put out on the first date, that I think it should be jokingly touched upon in an early S4 episode.  That would be hysterical.

I say this as a completely hetero woman, but I think I may be a little in love with you right now. 

Your stuff never disappoints.  I am always left happy, and usually, giddy.  This one is no different; I love it.

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aawww... i love this! and the whole resorting to banter as a defense is totally what i'd expect from those two crazy kids. love, love, love. did i mention i love?

Ok this chapter was AMAZING!!!  I loved the up and down emotions and you had my heart in my throat and then I was laughing seconds later....really really great writing 

And while there were a ton of favorite lines to choose from I think this one just topped them all

 "what kind of common hussy do you take me for?"

HAAAAAAAA!!!!  Loved it all thanks for sharing!! 

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Ya know, the first lines of this reminded me of something that happened on a vacation with the family recently. So, I was really pissed at something my brother did. I can't for the life of me remember. But, I was like, basically, angry at him, and angry at my mom for not doing anything about him. And so, we were at the hotel, and our room had a balcony. So I went out there to fume and think... it was the one place where I could be alone. But then my mom went and ruined it, because she kept going out there to check on me, and saying stupid stuff like, "oh, avoiding the issue, yeah that will help" and it just angered me more, and so I went to bed angrier than I was when I started. Its like, sometimes you just need a moment alone, and yeah, so odd but that was what I thought of when I was reading that experience. You need a moment alone, but the other person involved has to know when not to interrupt, and when its okay. Its like, if my mom had waited like 10 more minutes, I would have gone back in and been the worlds best daughter. but instead, she ruined the night and the next morning. (ooh, place all the blame on her!)
But then again, that was also a different type of argument than the one they have. What is oddly, such a romantic scene in my head is the one where you are like so angry, but then the other person comes over, and its like, you just feel so safe in their arms that you start to cry. I dunno. it sounds odd even as I am typing this. okay, so here is the deal, it is late at night and i woke up early, so if this is just the worlds strangest review... um, blame it on that. and hoepfully you will get enjoyment out of my ramblings.

Oh, and the idea of Pam in a hoodie... totally brings up a girlcrush moment :) (what I like jim/pam in casual clothes)

There hands were mere centimeters apart against the cupboard and she wrapped hers around his.
The only thing I think with this line is I think you meant Their hands...? or is it my slep deprived brain that is reading it weird.

Seriously, loved it. loved loved loved loved. And since I didn't quote anything, just assume I would quote the entire thing. And then imagine me saying amazing deep thoughtful stuff about the entire chapter... because suddenly during this chapter, that whole sleep deprived thing caught up with me, and i am thinking it may be time to turn off the lights and go to sleep.

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::thunderous applause:: hooray!! that was FANTASTIC, and the last line killed me a little bit.  you rock so hard.

LoveFool, I love you....

The hardest part of writing JAM is banter and frankly you have it down...completely... And the last line made me grin... :-D

~tizzy