10 [Report This]Date: August 14, 2006 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 6: "The Dundees"
I loved this. I love, love, love drunk!Pam and this scene is great.
10 [Report This]Date: August 14, 2006 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 7: "Sexual Harassment"
Aw, I really liked the interaction between Jim and Pam's mom. Especially at then end when he says that he is trying and she says tells not to stop trying. Great story! :)
Date: August 14, 2006 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 7: "Sexual Harassment"
PAM'S MOM IS AMAZING. I think that's all that needs to be said. And you still remain one of my favorite Jam writers ever. Thank you for this.
Date: August 14, 2006 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 7: "Sexual Harassment"
I had missed this serie when you started it earlier. Just lovely. Love the tension and the intimacy that is too close for comfort between Pam & Jim.
10 [Report This]Date: August 14, 2006 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 7: "Sexual Harassment"
Oh girl7.
This man. I swear. The way people write him I honestly get a pain in my chest he breaks my heart so.
Go Mrs. Beesly.
Date: August 14, 2006 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Pilot
Really, really liked these last two scenes. The one with Mrs. Beesly was so touching - you had Jim being so Jim, so poignant and quietly soulful.
Interesting too, because I'd often thought that a rich vein to follow (on the actual show) re: the drunk Dundies kiss, would have been the idea that people only lose their inhibitions when drunk, but don't say/do anything they don't really mean on some level.
Thanks for the great update!
Author's Response: Thanks, as always, for that great feedback! And yes - drunken people don't say things they don't really mean. (I'm looking at you, Mel Gibson. Sorry -- couldn't resist!)
Date: August 14, 2006 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 7: "Sexual Harassment"
I love, *love* Pam's mom, and have been trying to imagine for awhile now how Jim and her could've spoken in that particular episode. This works for me.
Author's Response: I love her, too! And yes, I just kept thinking who's to say that they didn't get to talk? And she'd have to know.....
Date: August 14, 2006 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 7: "Sexual Harassment"
Almost as if divorced from his own volition, he whispered, “I’m trying….I really am.”
Beautiful line. (But Jim, please try harder!)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: August 14, 2006 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 6: "The Dundees"
The Dundees was such a charged episode, and it was very fitting for a season premiere, b/c it really kicked things up a notch between J&P right off the bat. Your interpretation of drunk Pam was really, really good. I can see her becoming a chatty drunk, but at the same time you give me the impression that she wasn't as drunk as she seemed, that she was using it as a cover to try to get some answers out of Jim.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I just kept thinking that if her internal governor was off enough for her to kiss him in front of everybody, then what would stop her from just blabbing it all out at him? ...Although I also think she wasn't as drunk as she seemed - just enough to be a little more bold. :o)
10 [Report This]Date: August 14, 2006 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 7: "Sexual Harassment"
Wonderful moment! I have my hopes pinned on Pam's mom straightening everyone out for season 3!
10 [Report This]Date: August 14, 2006 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 6: "The Dundees"
When she didn’t say anything, he looked up, glancing over the menu to find her smiling at him, chin on her hand, something very….female in her expression.
I love that description of calculating, drunk Pam. These are really fun!
Author's Response:
Aw, thank you! :o)
Date: August 03, 2006 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 5: "Basketball"
I *love* your interpretation of Basketball. So, so hot between them in the bathroom. I loved this part in your other fic as well.
Date: August 03, 2006 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 5: "Basketball"
Roy gets the tub, Jim needs a cold shower. That was nice and steamy.
Date: August 03, 2006 09:28 am Title: Chapter 5: "Basketball"
I must have read this at fanfiction.net or something, but I still love it so much.
Ever since I saw this episode, I just love the part when he runs by her and she raises her eyebrows like she's impressed and licks her lips. Because that was totally my reaction, too. Just... damn. John Krasinski is amazing.
10 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2006 08:23 am Title: Chapter 5: "Basketball"
Got half way through this before I realized I'd read it before - just as captivating the second time!
Love your description of P's reaction when J ran by her on the court ('She absently caught herself tilting...') I always thought she looked almost drunk on him in that shot. Can't blame her.
Author's Response: "Drunk on him" -- wow, YES. Exactly. And I think her expression pretty much summed up all of our thoughts: Damn. :o)
Date: August 01, 2006 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 4: Diversity Day
Oh, my. Heh.
Author's Response: For some reason, this review just makes me laugh and laugh. Thank you!
Date: August 01, 2006 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 4: Diversity Day
Please continue with these between-the-scenes glimpses. You're doing an awesome job.
Date: August 01, 2006 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Pilot
Ooh, I liked your explanation for the nervousness between them at the end of the pilot.
9 [Report This]Date: August 01, 2006 11:10 am Title: Chapter 1: The Pilot
I hope you continue with these!
Date: August 01, 2006 09:19 am Title: Chapter 3: Hot Girl
I'm really enjoying these - very well written and very true to their characters. I'm anxious to read more.