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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 36: Gay Witch Hunt (sort of - not really)

I am so sorry to see this story end.  I have thoroughly enjoyed reading each chapter. Totally awesome ending.

Reviewer: Boof Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 35: At Last

AAAAA....ok, so This Woman's Worth is one of my favorite songs.  And now, it will have an extra special meaning to it when I hear it next!  Perfect song for the situation.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 35: At Last

Jim's goodbyes at the office was so very sad - as was Jim and Pam at his house in the beginning.  But when the sadness ended, that was the hottest JAMiness EVER. Wow, you can write some love scenes!! WOW.

Reviewer: Boof Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 33: Aftermath

I liked how you portrayed Roy in this.  You didn't go for the quick anger--I liked that.  I felt the anger and hurt he did have were justified.  Can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 34: More Aftermath (running out of titles here....)

I truly loved this line from Michael - “Pam….sometimes you have to put your faith in chance in order to really have one.”  Then at the end I was afraid Pam was going to change her mind.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 33: Aftermath

The scene with Roy and Pam was so believable. I'm glad she had the strength to continue on with Roy breaking down so. Very realistic too for him to try to fix it with kissing and sex.  Very well done.

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 36: Gay Witch Hunt (sort of - not really)

Yay for happy endings!  I can't believe that they have that kind of willpower to stay apart for even a few weeks, after already sleeping together! 

Jim being such a gentleman, even after she asked him to come back, is so swoon-worthy.

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 36: Gay Witch Hunt (sort of - not really)

OH MY GOSH!!!!!  I really loved this and you did an amazing job.  Simply wonderful.

Reviewer: Amyryd Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 36: Gay Witch Hunt (sort of - not really)

GAH!! You are the Queen of Angst and I love it! Seriously, chapeters 33-36 nearly brought me to tears at work. I am really not sure how I made it out of work with my dignity intact!! Thank you for such a wonderful journey (even if I thought it was going to kill me!!)

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 36: Gay Witch Hunt (sort of - not really)

Oh, lovely. You finished up with the hot and the sweet and the good. This has been an amazing journey.

Reviewer: proposals Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 36: Gay Witch Hunt (sort of - not really)

Yay! Pretty much every moment of this made me bounce in my chair. Dwight's birthday? The emails? The kangaroo incident? Ryan? Creed? All of it was gold.

I have a feeling that I'll be reading this a lot when the new season comes and makes us all angsty.

Reviewer: proposals Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 35: At Last

I had to stop for a few minutes after I read his goodbye to Dwight, because oh man, that was just... difficult.

It’s okay now.”  She announced proudly.

This felt like I was seriously watching the show, seeing it finally happen, and just not being able to stop smiling and laughing and just being so happy. This is amazing.

Reviewer: proposals Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 34: More Aftermath (running out of titles here....)

I hate Coldplay, but I can definitely get behind the Death Cab lyrics! This chapter completely killed me. Poor, poor Jim. Poor Pam. I would say poor Roy, but I'm bitter and he hit Jim.

Love this.

Reviewer: Colette Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 36: Gay Witch Hunt (sort of - not really)

Holy shit. (Pardon my French, but there are no English words.) Parts 33-36? Devoured in one sitting. And 'At Last' - on the living room floor?  That T rating definitely went M there, and gloriously so. Yum. I seriously don't know what to say, other than you are a force of nature, pounding these stories out, one great one after another.

Author's Response: Yay!  Thanks so much - I'm glad you liked it!  This is what happens when I spend a day drinking wine and writing.  I'm really glad you liked it, though! 

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Pilot

Okay, it's official. When I get home there's going to be some ravaging on the living room floor...

You're the bomb, baby!



Author's Response: Hahaha!  I'm glad you liked it - and hey, thanks for all the great reviews!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 11:53 am Title: Chapter 36: Gay Witch Hunt (sort of - not really)

Wow, one can only hope it happens that way. Fingers crossed. Great job.



Author's Response: Mine are crossed - I'm almost CERTAIN those writers are going to make us happy.  Damn it, they'd better....

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 11:48 am Title: Chapter 35: At Last

Oh that was very sweet and tender.

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 11:42 am Title: Chapter 34: More Aftermath (running out of titles here....)

Give u Roy, Jim's the better partner for Pam.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2006 11:38 am Title: Chapter 33: Aftermath

Ok that was very heavy.  On to the next since I see it is posted.

Reviewer: anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 09, 2006 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 31: Casino Night - part II

This is really heavy on the song lyrics.  Also, this might just be a personal thing, but I am hating Jim's brother because anyone who goes by "Jonathan" instead of "Jon" makes me cringe.

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2006 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 32: The Day After

Intense.  I guess I've read all these fics where Pam tells Roy immediately when she decides, but--how would you start that conversation, especially at work?  This might be more realistic. 

Jonathan is like the best big brother ever.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2006 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 32: The Day After

You're navigating the possible cheese grenades beautifully- no need to worry!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2006 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 32: The Day After

I was afraid that Jonathan might be developing feelings for Pam, too, although he wouldn't do that to his brother. So much sadness and agnst, and she hasn't even told Roy yet. Poor Jim and poor Pam. I feel badly for all of them. Even Roy in a way.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2006 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 31: Casino Night - part II

What an awesome chapter.  I felt so badly when Jim was hurting so. And how wise of Jim to realize it would take her time to end the relationship with Roy and get over the guilt.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2006 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 30: Casino Night - part I

This was so beautifully done. I had to chuckle over Pam saying that Jonathan could do the reading at the wedding.

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