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Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2008 06:01 pm Title: I'm thinking of the words to say

Awww Jimbo :(

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02, 2007 11:16 am Title: I'm thinking of the words to say

HA! Jim's the prudish one! Nice. Loved the surprise appearance of Kevin and the fact that Pam wasn't bothered by the idea of the list at all. And Pam referring to her girls as her best assets! Hee!

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01, 2007 03:34 pm Title: I'm thinking of the words to say

=(  Poor Pam...or poor Jim...not sure which.  Probably both...I'm sure you'll be fixing this in the next chapter.  Anyways...I love it when Jim calls her Beesley.  Just so adorable.  Their flirtations are such a joy to read and you've captured the characters very well.  Loved it.  And Kevin made me laugh...I could really hear him saying those things.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2007 01:23 pm Title: I'm thinking of the words to say

Oh poor Pam.  But I'd have to side with Jim here since he just did break up with Karen. Things need to go slow though we all want them to have hot sex.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2007 09:43 am Title: I'm thinking of the words to say

Courage and honesty come with a price, sometimes. I love the banter and the tension and the laughter, and I literally yelped when she accidentally did the crotch-grab. I can't wait to see where this goes!

Reviewer: FancyNewBeesly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2007 10:58 pm Title: I'm thinking of the words to say

Hands down the best JAM first date I've read! So simple, funny and sweet....up until the whole Pam crying in the bathroom thing, but angst is always good too. I'm going to read chapter 3 right now, I just had to stop and gush about how adorable this chapter was!

Reviewer: receptionist Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2007 08:28 pm Title: I'm thinking of the words to say

Shrek the Third?!?!?  that's hillarious... more reviews to come... ;)  so far I love it!

Reviewer: Daoust Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2007 06:46 pm Title: I'm thinking of the words to say

Ha ha. Stupid Jim! Screw first, ask questions later!!!  Great story so far, and great chapter.  You are a master, Moxie.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2007 05:40 pm Title: I'm thinking of the words to say

Uh oh!  What a great date until the end!  Hopefully, Jim will manage to smooth things over.

I especially enjoyed the "looking down the shirt" bit - that was really funny!  And, of course, the bit with Kevin!!! 

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2007 11:31 am Title: I'm thinking of the words to say

Whoa! Theres another chapter! Its like, a double delicious treat... no idea where that phrase came from.

Pam has an apartment with a front porch? I dunno, I am willing to buy it for the story. And I have no idea what apartments are like, because I haven't bought my first yet (oooh, graduation so close), and the only apartment I can picture is the one from Friends. But, I digress.

And Jim in jeans - my total weakness. I just had to pause to imagine that for a bit... yay Jim in Jeans!

I totally think of JAM every EVERY time there is something about 28 Weeks Later. SO glad someone encorporated it into a fic!

And Shrek the 3rd!!! :D! Wow, great way to work in films!

And I wanna see Spiderman 3 also... I am going to go broke with Shrek, Spiderman, License to Wed, Evan Almighty...

Have I told you recently you are an amazing writer? No... well, you are. But, if you don't make happy JAM soon, then I may have to kick your ass...

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