10 [Report This]Date: April 28, 2009 10:19 am Title: Jim
I LOVED this! I love the short simple stories like this that are still so powerful, nicely done. And Jim's voice, yum, I know exactly what you mean by his voice having that affect, I love JKras' voice, it's just wonderful...and now I am rambling, sorry :)
Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the review. :D Makes me smile to get a review on an older story, and besides, this is a great review. And yeah, trust me. The amount of sound clips from JK/Jim... well, I certainly love his voice also! ;)
Date: February 12, 2009 10:00 am Title: Jim
;askejr;askdjfas I love this.
Author's Response: Haha, thanks. I had fun thinking of this one!
Date: July 12, 2007 02:14 am Title: Jim
This deserves the ribbon it got! So sweet! Love it!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Oh yeah, that ribbon means the WORLD to me.
Date: June 14, 2007 11:13 am Title: Jim
Um, I love your fic! That last part with the vows brought a tear to my eye, I have to say. Loverly!
Author's Response: Aww, thanks. That is so sweet. I am glad you enjoyed :)
Date: June 14, 2007 06:47 am Title: Jim
SWEET!!! aww! i have a HUGE grin on my face right now. I was expecting Jim, but not expecting this. it's short and simple, but says SO much. i get it you know? how he can say such a simple thing and it just be everything.anyway, it's lovely. :)
Author's Response:
Aww, I am so glad I made you smile (yeah, ultimate compliment). Yes. I totally understand. Its so like, gah, he is so perfect, and he can just convey all this emotion and everything.
Thanks again!
Date: June 13, 2007 08:58 pm Title: Jim
Such a cute story! I didnt have a chance to get to it until tonight...it's great. Very sweet and a cute take. I love the idea. So...well done, my friend, well done.
-Oh, I'm starting to work on SL again and I totally deleted that email of your dream guy (not Jim, Jessica!). So, you should totally email me that list of things that you picture your dude being like...oh, and the names. :) I'm putting you to work since you slandered my name in your fic! JK!!! Totally joking. I'm honored!
Author's Response:
Hehe, I am so glad you read... I thought of it forever ago, and just wrote it down, and I so love the response!!
Fine, if I can't have Jim, I will just email you again!
8 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 06:49 pm Title: Jim
Oh, such a romantic ending. Those wedding vows are beautiful, especially "My one true love". But would you really consider wedding vows to be "those fateful words" ?
Author's Response:
thank google for the vows. yes. i really did google wedding vows. and, true... fateful isn't really the best word... okay, my vocabulary sucks. i admit it
thanks for all the reviews!
9 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 06:19 pm Title: Jim
Awwwww! So cute. Man she really has issues with Pammy, eh? I also like that you didn't title the last chapter although who else could it have possibly been about. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I don't think she likes Pammy at all. And, I didn't mean to not title the last chapter... it was an accident :). Haha. But yes, anyone who couldn't guess who it was about before hand... yeah, they need help. :)
Date: June 13, 2007 05:27 pm Title: Jim
That was really an interesting story. I like that you went through all these stages in Pam's life. One suggestion... I think I would have gone for a shorter sentence at the end, like Jim saying "Pamela, I thee wed" because I think you might have gotten more impact from a single sentence. Still, it was a fun read. :)
Author's Response:
Sorry, getting a ribbon excited me WAY more than it should.
I didn't ever think of doing that - only with one line... hmmm. I like the vows, but you are right with the impact.
Date: June 13, 2007 04:51 pm Title: Jim
Mmmmmmmmmmmmm. Wedding fluff. Yay!
Author's Response: Yep. Wedding fluff! And I loved those vows when i saw them (yes, I googled Wedding vows), cause I just so thought that was so them!
Date: June 13, 2007 04:22 pm Title: Jim
Very, very sweet story. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks! :) I haven't really written much fluff, but right now, its just so easy!