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Reviewer: hannasus Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 12, 2007 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 1

So I was just surfing around the archive, looking for old fics that I'd missed and I stumbled across this. It's... beautiful. So sad and so moving and so wonderfully written it made my heart feel full. Lovely! 

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 10, 2006 03:16 am Title: Chapter 1

Amazing. Truly amazing. How real you make all this, how believable and sad and just ... so ... great. Thank you.

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 08, 2006 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

First time I've read this point of view for Pam, that she knows she should love him, that she tries, but it's just not happening. I seemed very real, very possible.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 08, 2006 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh! Lovely. I can totally see Jim trying to harden his heart against Pam in self-defense. Pam's drifting feels totally and completely real, here, too. I think she really doesn't know how much she gets from Jim and how he makes the rest of her life OK.  Thank goodness for the note of hope at the end, or this would be incredibly bleak!

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 08, 2006 02:45 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh Pam.  I second the wanting to shake thing.  This is a wonderful cautionary tale.  You wait too long and someday someone might not wait for you.

Very well done.

Reviewer: Smurfette729 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08, 2006 01:17 am Title: Chapter 1

Absolutely wonderful story. I happened to be listening to "Bridge Over Troubled Water" when I was reading it and, I'm not gonna lie, I got a little teary. Because you made Pam so heartbreaking and their relationship used to be like in the song but now it's not and... yeah. Not a good idea on my part.

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2006 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

I am a bit overwhelmed by the angst, and had an urge to shake Pam.  Very good story, if terribly sad. 

Reviewer: princesslisa Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2006 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ouch. This hurts me so much. Really excellent job.

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2006 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, man.

Just rip my heart out, why don't you, woman! 

*Sniff* 

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