Date: June 18, 2007 02:26 pm Title: Con el Dedo (beruco)
Nice job with this guys, and a good way for them to "ease" into trying something new. I could see them having sort of a blushy, stammering discussion about what happened, and agreeing to continue with it, since it's them and it's consensual, and yeah, we all want to read about it. Well, maybe not that last bit. Again, nice job.
Date: June 18, 2007 01:26 pm Title: Con el Dedo (beruco)
That was quite well done! Perfectly in character, and well... wow.
Date: June 18, 2007 11:58 am Title: Con el Dedo (beruco)
I posted the same thing at livejournal, but in case you don't read the comments there - THIS STORY IS AWESOME. I love how you keep them in character, instead of simply changing the names to be Jim and Pam in a Penthouse Forum letter or something.
As far as the whole anal sex thing goes, I'm not into it in real life, but that's probably because of listening to Dr. Drew warn about rectal prolapse on Loveline since I was a freshman in high school. I don't care though, the story is hot, funny, and... yeah, hot. Please keep it going, both of you.
Author's Response: OMG! *snorts* P.S. I'm a little leary of butthole pleasures myself. Pam isn't though. She's super-sex-goddess.
9 [Report This]Date: June 18, 2007 11:47 am Title: Con el Dedo (beruco)
I...um. I know Kelly, and she knows how HOT I think her smut is, but MY GOODNESS, LADIES. I should NOT have read that at work. You are both DAWESOME for having the balls to address one of our cultures last true taboos. I, for one, am ALL about exploring every facet of characters and their sexuality, even if it gets a little dirty.
And OF COURSE, Jim kinda wants to try anal. He's a MAN, and I'd be hard pressed(TWSS) to find one who doesn't. And good for Pammy for knowing what she wants, and not being ashamed of wanting it.
Author's Response: Agreed and Agreed. And...don't call her Pammy!
10 [Report This]Date: June 18, 2007 10:43 am Title: Con el Dedo (beruco)
....slhlsghlskdhslgh Perhaps I will have a more coherent review when you post the next part. >>
Author's Response: Strings of incoherent letters are my second language. Bring it on.
Date: June 18, 2007 10:32 am Title: Con el Dedo (beruco)
I have no problem with this, story-wise. :)
You never know what those "nice" boys are interested in, no?
Author's Response: I love that you added story-wise.
Date: June 18, 2007 10:13 am Title: Con el Dedo (beruco)
rock em and shock em Halpert. Ah the things fniding ones boyfriend's porn stash will make one do.
rumor has it you guys are getting flack for this but I seriously think its awesome for y'all to be breaking new ground like this. Maybe it's just cause I'm from a younger generation than some MTT readers and anal sex is like "the thing" to do. Sadly, I knew a girl in high school who only did that because she wanted to stay a virgin *yikes*
Anyway, I love it and can't wait for more!
Author's Response: OMG, yikes! New rule--every review must include a sexual anecdote.
Date: June 18, 2007 09:48 am Title: Con el Dedo (beruco)
Wow. Hot doesn't even come close. Plus Jim in that hat is beyond adorable. Oh and kudos for actually using a real porno title. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I googled "porn DVD anal". SWEET finds, BTW.
9 [Report This]Date: June 18, 2007 09:32 am Title: Con el Dedo (beruco)
OMG!!!
I was totally thinking over the weekend too how I have never seen a fic venturing into the subject of anal. And look at what you give us! :D Haha!
Am I psychic? No, no, probably not.
I can't wait for more! Heehee!
Author's Response: Psychic or...perusing the TWOP boards. lol
Date: June 18, 2007 09:00 am Title: Con el Dedo (beruco)
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NAUGHTYLOVEGOODNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!
*runs around in a circle, then dies*
Author's Response: Best review ever! Woo! (/Pam)
10 [Report This]Date: June 18, 2007 08:27 am Title: Con el Dedo (beruco)
Jim Halpert DOES kind of want to try anal!
Author's Response: This story definitely stemmed from your LJ icon.
9 [Report This]Date: June 18, 2007 06:30 am Title: Con el Dedo (beruco)
Well thanks for, uh, easing us into this story. Remember, please be gentle. We're more likely to respond well as long as you're gentle. Too much?
Author's Response: Slow and steady wins the race.
Date: June 18, 2007 06:16 am Title: Con el Dedo (beruco)
I predict that this story will have about 7 million views and maybe 10 reviews. Hee. Good smut with good characterization can be tough to do...excellent job.
Author's Response: *snorts* So true. I'm happy to provide the goods, though.
10 [Report This]Date: June 18, 2007 06:02 am Title: Con el Dedo (beruco)
!!!!
This is amazing. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Me neither! lol. It's like I'm writing it and reading it! Collab fics are so much fun.
Date: June 18, 2007 05:53 am Title: Con el Dedo (beruco)
Holllly crap you guys.
This is already made of awesome and is HOT and HI KELLY'S FRIEND I DON'T KNOW. YOU CAN HAVE MY BABIES TOO IF YOU KEEP BEING SO AWESOME.
Author's Response: Score! That's the best offer I've gotten all day! (year?)
Date: June 18, 2007 04:09 am Title: Con el Dedo (beruco)
wow...just wow. And you know characterizationwise...I could totally see halpert carefully exploring anal, but too much and I think it'd break his brain. I think you got what his reaction would be spot on
Author's Response: You buys the butt-vids, you takes your chances. Man-up, Haplert!
Date: June 18, 2007 01:00 am Title: Con el Dedo (beruco)
I won't even get into the hotness of the smut because holy hell so hot, but instead this is awesome because of course jim keeps his porn in a tupperware container (that he probably got from his mom or an aunt or something as a housewarming gift) and of course he wears a sombrero and speaks in broken, awful spanish when he makes mexican food.
awesome. so awesome.
there is nothing i hate more who get so bent on smut that they forget that the little personality quirks are what make us care about the characters and are therefore the things that make them the most sexy.
Author's Response: Oh no, we are bound and determined for this to stay in-character dammit! Jim Halpert kind wants to try anal!
Author's Response: kind of. he kind OF want to try anal...
Date: June 18, 2007 12:42 am Title: Con el Dedo (beruco)
Wow. Well, well, well. You're making this work so far. Yikes. Who woulda thunk it?
You have a little typo in the second to last sentence - saide.
The last sentence is great. Also, I really liked when Pam saw the DVD (?) under the bed and was immediately intrigued. It was funny when she went into the kitchen and Jim looked so goofy that she thought someone must have planted the DVD (?). Funny.
I'm interested to see your...end result. Ba dum bump. Or, should I say, bum bump? Nah, I should definitely not say that.
Author's Response:
Typo fixed--thank you. And I'm planning on starting the piece we PM'd about tomorrow.
Bum bump will do just fine. TWSS?