Date: August 09, 2007 06:17 pm Title: At the end of the day...
Awww...very sweet.
Date: July 17, 2007 10:18 am Title: At the end of the day...
It's so very Jim that he would even notice those little things at all. He loves her that much.
nqllisi had mentioned to me that she finds the 55 word format to be almost like poetry. I'd say that's definitely true here. Each chapter was its own stanza.
(And my preferred seating is also middle-middle. Heh.)
Author's Response: nqllisi is very wise. ;-) I did find that as I wrote this, it started to flow like poetry in my head. I'm so happy you liked it!!
Date: July 16, 2007 07:58 pm Title: At the end of the day...
awww.... *tear*
I think anyone in any relationship has gone through this, but you know it's true love when you can let the little things go...
loved it
Author's Response: Thanks, PPC - I do hope we see some of the little bumps along their road like this. :^)
Date: July 16, 2007 10:32 am Title: At the end of the day...
Another cuddly cozy masterpiece!
Thanks Moxie!
Author's Response: another brilliantly benevolent review from you! Win-win-win!! :-D
Date: July 16, 2007 04:41 am Title: At the end of the day...
Life is not ever perfect, and "happily ever after" doesn't mean every single minute from now on...I love that you make this real and yet make the love so strong. And poor, scared Jim.
Author's Response: Yeah, too much knowledge about "real relationships" mean this little thing was just begging to be written. I have total faith in the strength of their relationship. I just need to do a story about Jim's little quirks... Thanks for reading!
Date: July 15, 2007 10:10 pm Title: At the end of the day...
Oh! I absolutely LOVE how you tied everything in!
Author's Response: thank you - I do try! :-)
10 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2007 09:04 am Title: At the end of the day...
aawwww.. i agree with you mox, they can't have a PERFECT relationship. but i'm glad you're still for the fluff!! very cute little drabbles..
Author's Response: thank you, StarShine! You know you can always count on me for the fluff in the end......
10 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2007 08:28 am Title: At the end of the day...
So real. Mr. Feared has a nasty habit of wadding up paper towels, napkins, tissues and stuffing them in the couch cushions. While I find this horribly disgusting, I would burst into tears everytime I found one if he wasn't here. Thanks for capturing this so well.
Author's Response:
thank you - I know I've complaints about Mr. Moxie's habits as well, but it's true that it makes them who they are...
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: July 15, 2007 03:54 am Title: At the end of the day...
Another winner Moxie!
Author's Response: Thanks, Abigail!!
Date: July 14, 2007 11:41 pm Title: At the end of the day...
awww....what a perfect ending! It's going to be so much fun getting to see what things annoy them about each otheer. Good, good fun!
Author's Response: yes - there is SOOOO much humor waiting to be written about the times they don't see eye to eye, don't you think?? Thanks for reviewing!
8 [Report This]Date: July 14, 2007 10:27 pm Title: At the end of the day...
You really got me with this one. As I read each chapter I found myself relating to things in my life (I too like to have the ceiling fan and a/c on and snuggle under the blankets) but when I got to the last one I swear tears started to flow. Our life had gotten to where some things about each other drove the other crazy, and then Mr. Kaystar was diagnosed in 2006 with Stage III of a rare form of cancer and suddenly all the things that had bothered us before seemed to evaporate as we realized how important life was and how neither of us wanted to live without the other. (Hope this isn't TMI, but this chapter really hit me.)
Author's Response: Never TMI from you, Kay - and I hope everything is going well now. I do think life is too short to sweat the small stuff, but that might be a defense mechanism since I know I must be pretty difficult to live with sometimes. ;-) Thanks for sharing with me.
10 [Report This]Date: July 14, 2007 09:32 pm Title: At the end of the day...
Wonderful ending, Moxie. You did such a great job in these 5 chapters with so few words. This is why you're the best author on the site.
Author's Response: Wow. I don't know if I'd go that far, but thank you so much! It's nice to write for such an easily pleased audience. ;-)
Date: July 14, 2007 09:28 pm Title: At the end of the day...
Awww..now you're making me cry. Those two together are cuter than fluffy bunnies and little ponies.
I love the summer, but never wanted September to come as much as I do now! Eeeeee.....
Author's Response:
I just hope the writers aren't sitting around laughing evilly at how high they've got our hopes up for s4. It won't be pretty if they did.....
Thanks for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: July 14, 2007 09:23 pm Title: At the end of the day...
Amen.......
Author's Response: thanks! :-)
8 [Report This]Date: July 14, 2007 09:18 pm Title: At the end of the day...
Aw! I knew he'd come around. That's our boy!
Excellent.
Author's Response: Yeah, deep down our boy's pretty sensible. And he's probably aware of how imperfect he is as well. Thanks for reading, dmscranton!
10 [Report This]Date: July 14, 2007 09:13 pm Title: At the end of the day...
Lovely, of course. It is good that the "perfect fairytale" part can't last forever. That would get kind of boring, yes? This is great...but what bothers Pam about Jim?
Author's Response: Good question - I'll have to have a think and get back to you on that.... :-D
Date: July 14, 2007 09:09 pm Title: At the end of the day...
Priorities, Mr. Halpert. Glad he got some perspective.
This is utterly sweet & adorable, of course.
(One more story to be most prolific, you know!)
Author's Response:
Yeah, perspective is a good thing. And I think he'll be happier when he realises she's not perfect. She can come down off the pedestal and still be his. :-)