Date: August 13, 2007 12:25 pm Title: Closets and Cookies
I really love that Sunny cares so much about other people. Such a good person. And especially that she truly loves kids and seems to enjoy helping them.
Can't wait to learn more about her!
Author's Response: Oo! Thank you! I'm glad you like her, but I'm worried that she's too good. Maybe I need to make her kick a puppy? :D Thanks so much for your comments, desert island.
Date: August 10, 2007 05:43 am Title: Closets and Cookies
Oooh. Todd Packer is the worst asshole of all time. And so sad that the condoms aren't there for any good, fluffy reason. Still, this was exceptionally well-written, and I'm very glad you updated. I am almost unnaturally interested in the adventures of this character that you've created to add to the DM universe.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, sad to say, the condoms are non-fluffy. But there's more fluffy in the offing, so don't despair. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: August 09, 2007 07:10 pm Title: Closets and Cookies
Kind of on the fly here, but just wanted to say that I was really glad to come home this evening and see you'd updated. Typically not a big fan of non-canon characters (too often Mary Sues or just plain 'off' in the context of the show) but Sunny is so well fleshed out and relatable, that I can almost forget she's not actually part of TO universe (actually? How meta is that?) And, as usual, you have a great take on Creed (that's a compliment, I swear.) Liking this perspective. More soon, I hope.
Author's Response: Busted! Yes, Sunny is totally a Mary Sue. Because I want to become a cleaning lady at Dunder Mifflin so I can stalk Creed. How pathetic is that? :D Thanks for reviewing, Colette. I always appreciate your comments.
9 [Report This]Date: August 09, 2007 05:05 pm Title: Closets and Cookies
Thanks for the new chapter. It's another great one. I love your version of Creed and the way he saved Sunny from Todd. Ugh, Todd. Makes me wonder how he used those missing condoms.
How are you enjoying this experiment? Will you keep writing new chapters (she asks, hopefully)? FWIW, it's my favorite story of yours.
Author's Response: I'm enjoying this a lot, and though it may not look like it, I do have a destination in mind so there will definitely be more chapters, and a final chapter. It's rather loose, however, and I find odd little things creeping in here and there, like the fact that Creed drives different cars to work every day and knows the Mayor. But there's more to come, for sure. Thanks so much for the kind words, TVB!
8 [Report This]Date: August 09, 2007 04:28 pm Title: Closets and Cookies
I was so happy to see another chapter! You have such a vivid imagination.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad to see there is a good use for this wild imagination.