Date: October 16, 2007 03:48 am Title: A Toothbrush
I was just reading through this again and felt the need to tell you that it's wonderful. i was definitely anticipating this happening, but it's written so well, and it's still a surprise. he gave her her own room! :) i also love how he just kisses her in front of everyone and how Oscar walks away smiling because he just KNOWS! anyway, it's a great fic that i really enjoy even after several readings.
8 [Report This]Date: August 27, 2007 07:48 am Title: A Toothbrush
Haha, the little oral hygenie oke makes me smile.
And then Jim goes and says that...
I won't throw garbage at you just because there is another chapter and I prefer to wait to throw a lot of garbage at once.
8 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2007 07:40 pm Title: A Toothbrush
"It's void of emotion or feeling, and all the hope he'd been storing up until that point vanishes." Poor Jim. That line was so heartbreakingly sad.
Date: July 28, 2007 12:09 am Title: A Toothbrush
Great tension. You are so slow in letting us know exactly what happened. Post more soon!
Date: July 27, 2007 01:58 pm Title: A Toothbrush
*Throws garbage* No! I was so excited after reading last chapter but then I saw this one! This is so heartbreaking but amazing at the same time! I know you won't disappoint with the last chapter.
10 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2007 01:24 pm Title: A Toothbrush
Gah, I continue to love this. Honestly, it's one of the first post-Season 3 stories that I get excited about seeing updated.
I think the emotions, communication styles, and issues are spot-on for the characters - love that it looks like Pam's having communication issues and Jim is insecure about their relationship and maybe pushing it a bit too fast. That seems so real for these two - it's not like their vast issues are going to disappear overnight, and I love that you're exploring that.
Date: July 27, 2007 01:16 pm Title: A Toothbrush
For the love of god, please make it better with the fifth thing! This is beautifully written and breaking my heart.
Date: July 27, 2007 11:37 am Title: A Toothbrush
Eek! This is breaking my heart! What a great job, though... Will be on the lookout for Chapter 5!
9 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2007 06:39 am Title: A Toothbrush
Oh! You are just breaking my heart! Hurts so good. Give me some happy! PLEASE, PRETTY PLEASE!!!!!
Date: July 27, 2007 06:38 am Title: A Toothbrush
Ok so I think now I'm getting why they broke up (did he ask her to move in with him and she hesitated?) but it's still breaking my heart. Please fix them in the final chapter....or you know, forget the whole 5 thing and keep it going longer, your choice ;o)
10 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2007 06:34 am Title: A Toothbrush
I just emptied my trash can, so no garbage will be thrown. I might squirt my water bottle at you...but that's all. lol
Date: July 27, 2007 05:41 am Title: A Toothbrush
Wow. These hurt horribly. And I love that it feels like it was Pam who ended things, maybe because they were moving too fast, and that they still care about each other regardless. This hurts, because my dearest wish is for them to be happy-ever-after, but it is so cleanly, realistically written that I can't argue. Beautiful.
9 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2007 05:39 am Title: A Toothbrush
Oh no, so sad. But now we kind of know why they broke up and for some strange reason that gives me hope. It's not the type of break-up that seems finalized, because it's not irreversible. They still love each other. They just need to talk.
I'm really really enjoying this story. I love the angle you've decided to take.
Date: July 27, 2007 05:10 am Title: A Toothbrush
No, I would never throw garbage at you, my dear Swiffer! (Well, maybe if this chapter sucked...) Heh... But this chapter most definitely does NOT suck. I'm loving this bold adventure of exploring the dark side of JAM that you're on, and I think you should be proud of this little experiment here.
As we've talked about before, it's okay to not have things be perfect between these two. You've proven that a well-crafted story trumps angsty subject matter. :)
Looking forward to the last chapter!
Date: July 27, 2007 03:52 am Title: A Toothbrush
Ah, some real insight/hints into why they broke up! I was wondering. Back to sad, but I'm still not losing hope...!
Date: July 27, 2007 03:37 am Title: A Toothbrush
*threateningly holds garbage aloft* They're gonna get back together, right? Because these two can't live without each other. If this is over, the universe is going to split in two, and it's gonna be all your fault.
I'm just sayin'. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: July 26, 2007 10:59 pm Title: A Toothbrush
I just don't know if I can ever say enough about this fic, and it's difficult for me to comment without using my normal snark, but the snark just wouldn't be appropriate.
One more to go. Make it a good one.
Date: July 26, 2007 10:46 pm Title: A Toothbrush
I won't throw garbage at you, but I'm definitely going to pelt you with black licorice. How could you, you big meanie? Dash my hopes, why dontcha? Well, I will expect you to make it up to me in the last chapter. I know just what I want to see returned! :)
By the way, sorry to confuse you with my last comment about coffee. I just meant the way sometimes you ask someone in for coffee and it's really code for "Say, would you like to come in for some sex?" That kinda thing. :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 26, 2007 10:26 pm Title: A Toothbrush
Another great chapter. It feels so real, which makes it all the more painful.
9 [Report This]Date: July 26, 2007 10:16 pm Title: A Toothbrush
ignoring the bad taste settling in his mouth
Too bad he gave her her toothbrush back ;-)
It was really good, again, of course. I'm craving more, I need more, it's my drug to calm the JAMititis.