10 [Report This]Date: August 17, 2007 11:57 am Title: Domestic God
I like that Fancy New Beesely says what she thinks without censor. Yay for her. Can I have a Jim to move in with me?
Date: August 07, 2007 07:03 pm Title: Domestic God
I love happy Pam lusting after Chef Jim. "So freaking hot..." Yes Pam, yes he is! Oh, and the "I think you should move in" and "OK" were perfect!!
Date: August 05, 2007 11:40 am Title: Domestic God
Okay. I would make Jim move in even if he didn't know how to make Eggs Benedict. Shit, I don't think I've ever made it before! Can you update like right now?
Date: August 04, 2007 03:34 pm Title: Domestic God
This:
"From now on Pam...try and be prepared, ok?"
She sighed a bit dreamily. "Ok."
is adorkable. Pam is in a post-Halpert dream state and Jim is busy looking for food. Just awesome.
Looking foward to the next chapter.
Date: August 04, 2007 09:12 am Title: Domestic God
Awesome!!! I really like your writing style, quick and clean. Please keep this series going!
Date: August 03, 2007 01:19 pm Title: Domestic God
Hell yeah he should move in! The boy knows how to make Hollandaise sauce?!? Dear God.
I'm pretty sure I've said this in every review I've left you, but I'm going to say it again because it's true: You're ruining the chance of me ever finding a man that lives up to your Jim Halpert. So when I'm a crazy old cat lady, I'm blaming you.
Oh, and uhh, this is really good :D Thought I should mention that.
Author's Response: Well maybe we can be crazy cat ladies together, because I'm pretty sure I've been ruined as well! lol. Poor us. ....Well, at least we have fictional Jim to entertain us. lol
Date: August 03, 2007 09:57 am Title: Domestic God
aww... so sweet! I love the idea of Jim cooking something fancy... :)
Author's Response: :-)
Date: August 03, 2007 09:18 am Title: Domestic God
These are so sweet!! Great voices, too. Really enjoying them and looking forward to more:)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks Bitterpill! I appreciate the review and hope you enjoy the rest!
8 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2007 08:40 am Title: Domestic God
Awww! Awwwwwwwwww!!! This is adorable. *loves*
Author's Response: Thank you!!!!!!!!! Thanks so much for the feedback. I really appreciate it.
Date: August 03, 2007 07:38 am Title: Domestic God
Heh... I've always believed that Jim is a better cook than we've seen. Just because he eats ham and cheese or tuna fish for lunch, doesn't mean he can't make eggs benedict. It's totally plausible. Well done.
Author's Response: absolutely. I bring Lean Cuisine to work, but I can still make something yummy if I need to! Thanks so much for the feedback!!!
10 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2007 07:12 am Title: Domestic God
Oh! These are so fun!! I look forward to more. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks Moxie!!! So glad you liked them! More to come soon! :-)
Date: August 03, 2007 07:02 am Title: Domestic God
This was so much fun! Thank you! So awesome.
Pam blinked again to clear the fog of lust. Ahahaha!
Author's Response: hehhehe. I imagine it's a pretty thick fog with Jim in the room, huh! Thanks so much for the review!
Date: August 03, 2007 07:00 am Title: Domestic God
Once again, it's almost eery how well you capture these characters' voices - the wit, the aching sweetness - and so simply, without overwriting it. In other word, just how it plays on the show. Love, love, love hollandaise-making, bare torsoed Jim (he cooked it for his mom? Be still my maternal heart) and lusty, happy Pam. And, need I tell you that their last exchange made me grin like an idiot? I'm already addicted - more please.
Author's Response: :-) I'm SO glad you're enjoying this. Really! Your reviews always inspire me. And yeah-- I'm glad you appreciated that last bit. It was definitely MY favorite part.
Date: August 03, 2007 06:47 am Title: Domestic God
Good God, Cooking!Jim is sexy. Please consult me the next time you're looking for somewhere to live. Yeah, Pam, get right on that, would you?
Author's Response: Seriously....who wouldn't take him up on THAT offer right away?! And I've always thought Jim cooking would be hella sexy, so I'm so glad you agree!
10 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2007 06:05 am Title: Domestic God
Awww, I love how simple that was- "i think you shouild move in."
"ok."
Author's Response: Lord, if only their relationship had been this simple, huh? Here's hoping Season 4 brings some simplicity (I doubt it...but we can hope and pray!) lol. Thanks so much for the feedback!
8 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2007 04:51 am Title: Domestic God
Very nice! I especially liked this chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Thank you!!! Hope you enjoy the chapters that follow!