10 [Report This]Date: October 25, 2007 08:06 pm Title: Strange Bedfellows
this.was.AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.
lovelovelove to you for this piece of awesomeness.
Date: September 22, 2007 10:14 pm Title: Strange Bedfellows
I love what you have so far. It seems very natural and the dialogue is very true to the characters. I especially liked that monkies thing. I was cracking up for a full minute, seriously. Even now, I'm still laughing.
Date: September 21, 2007 08:45 am Title: Strange Bedfellows
"Oh my God Pam! You're totally messing up the bed! What the hell are we gonna do now!" Jim yelled. HA! I can totally see that.
And messing up the bed is definitely the best part.
9 [Report This]Date: September 21, 2007 08:41 am Title: Strange Bedfellows
That was great lovefool. Just the perfect playful yet loving, sexy tone. Your dialogue for Jim seemed to really ring true to the character.
10 [Report This]Date: September 21, 2007 07:36 am Title: Strange Bedfellows
Love, Love, Love, Love, Love.
Especially since I'm a bed-making freak, too. No one else can make my bed just right.
And this line: Did you pay no attention to the monkeys at all?
OWNS me...
10 [Report This]Date: September 21, 2007 07:24 am Title: Strange Bedfellows
Go Jim.......lol
Date: September 21, 2007 05:07 am Title: Strange Bedfellows
You already know I live for these little moments. But, could I adore frisky, teasing, bed-messing Jim any more? You seriously channel the characters in the dialogue - this chapter is jampacked with gems: The standards, "This is not a thing!"...and my fave: Pam...did you pay no attention to the monkies at all?
I am an absolute glutton for these vignettes. It's become a true vice.
Date: September 21, 2007 04:31 am Title: Strange Bedfellows
"Living room? Oh right...you like to do it when Larry King is on....so weird," Jim added quietly. "Makes me feel dirty."
Hee! "Scranton, P-A, hello!" This is so cute! We need to know about Jim's thing. I mean his quirks, of course.