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Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2008 04:18 pm Title: A Happy Tune

Wee! Another one of these delicious moments, served with a side of sauce ;-) You still have me in your thrall with these morsels - the perfect serving size and seasoning every time. So he wants her to hum something...I'll just bet he does. You are too clever, my friend.


Author's Response: Ok, now I'm hungry. ;-).......I guess it was a side of sauce indeed. MBIFN (Miss Beesly if You're Nasty) was a lot of fun to write in this one. So happy these are still satisfying your cravings! :-)

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2008 03:01 pm Title: A Happy Tune

bahahaha! Oh wow, this was just such an adorkable little snippet here, lovefool! It especially resonated with me because I wrote a story not long ago where Jim had "Back in Black" as his ring tone on his cell phone. So, as I read this, I just kept thinking, "Oh yeah, it's totally plausible that he'd be humming that tune. After all, he hears it every time Pam calls his phone." 

(Yeah, see, I'm enough of a narcissist to believe that everyone knows what I'm thinking when they're writing their own stories! :P) 

Anyway, just a fantastic job here. Bravo! 



Author's Response: Omgoodness! I didn't know you did that! What story is that? Sounds right up my alley, obviously.  Thanks for the feedback CM!

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2008 10:12 am Title: A Happy Tune

DUNT... DUH-NUH-NUNT... DUH-NUH-NUNT.  Well, I'm not as happy as Jim, but reading this did make me happy.  Very awesome indeed, right down to the last nifty double entendre.  Always, always, great to see your name pop up in the bye-line.



Author's Response: awwww...nothing better than a little Back in Black - and it seems it IS hummable. lol. In writing this I kept thinking...can someone even hum that song? haha. Thanks so much for being such an awesome reader and responder BL.  Can we expect anything from you soon? I sure hope so!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2008 07:12 am Title: A Happy Tune

You are responsible for the big grin on my face right now, LoveFool.  "Maybe it would help if you hummed something...That's appalling Jim...but ok."  Best. Line. Ever : )

Author's Response: Thank. You. NanReg! ;-) So glad you enjoyed that line. This was a lot of fun.

Reviewer: Sweetpea Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2008 06:15 am Title: A Happy Tune

I'm STILL laughing.  Honestly, you go straight to that real and completely dorky element without ever being too much of anything that a good fic shouldn't be too much of.  (got that?)  I love Jim the 7th grader ("maybe it would help if you hummed something") so much. 

Author's Response: Man, I love your sentences. Say that again! ;-) Thanks Sweetpea. Lord knows this would not have seen the light of day without ya. :-)

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2008 06:15 am Title: A Happy Tune

Hehehehe so cute!

Author's Response: Thank you ma'am! :-)

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2008 06:05 am Title: A Happy Tune

Why was I thinking it was "Happy Working Song"?  Oops, wrong girl. 

This is adorable.  We need more semi-smutty (or full-on smutty) Jam.  Is it April yet?



Author's Response: Man, you ain't lyin...April where are ya? Seriously though, I'm so glad people enjoyed it. That's probably about as smutty as I get, so it was fun. haha. Thanks again for the review Miss Hoo.

Reviewer: Catie9 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2008 05:10 am Title: A Happy Tune

Ok, if there were an award for making me spit my Diet Coke out and onto the screen...you'd win, hands down. That last little exchange, particularly Pam's response (I know you're aware of it as you wrote it, but I can't help repeating it here, so here goes...ready?...That's appalling Jim...but ok.) had me cracking up!!


They are so effing cute and we finally get them back in April...but I'd still like to read more from you before then! Because the way you write them is just all kinds of delicious.


Awesome job, LF! Oh, and I loved the shout out to Philly Jim!


And I'm off to listen to Back in Black...which will most likely be stuck in my head for the remainder of the day

Author's Response: hehehe...thanks Catie9! I will definitely try my best to get something else out before the big day! I'm so happy they are coming back too!  ALSO...I love making people spit things on their screen -- now I'll just want to do it more. ;-)

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24, 2008 09:12 pm Title: A Happy Tune

Ha. Pam should be glad he wasn't humming "You Shook Me (All Night Long)" by AC/DC.
Thanks for the new chapter. After-sex silly talk = happy me!

Author's Response: hahah...yeah, I guess maybe Back in Black was a better way to go. haha. Too funny. Thanks for the feedback EH!

Reviewer: honeypioneer Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 24, 2008 08:58 pm Title: A Happy Tune

I absolutely adore this fic! This chapter was no exception. You've got the characters spot on...I could definitely see Jim and Pam speaking your dialogue

Author's Response: Oh that's so awesome!  I'm so glad you can hear them saying this random stuff. :-)

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