10 [Report This]Date: August 16, 2008 09:07 pm Title: Branch Closing
I totally could see Jim behaving like that with someone he trusts =) I am now convinced you ARE jim :)
Date: April 16, 2008 08:34 pm Title: Branch Closing
I loved the names! (How about Thrilled in Throop? ;))
Date: September 29, 2007 07:23 am Title: Branch Closing
duh, pam was who he was talking about.
but yeah, i think i can see bitter jim there. it is his sister, and the fact is, family can call us out on a lot of things and we hate them for it, but it makes us think even when we don't want to admit it. and stuff like that. so, i can buy it.
Date: September 12, 2007 07:13 pm Title: Branch Closing
Yes, this is a little heartbreaking! Poor Jim. You're making it very believable, though, that he thinks Pam's moving on...
Author's Response: Yeah, and then she thinks he's moving on, and they just have this big "S/he's moving on, I need to move on, but I love him/her, but does s/he love me back?" dance of FRUSTRATION all season. Gah!
Date: September 11, 2007 11:49 am Title: Branch Closing
ow... this is making my heart hurt. Don't do it, Jim!! Don't date Karen!! You'll be sorry!!!
Author's Response: Ah, young Jim, there's so much I need to warn you about . . .
Date: September 11, 2007 11:47 am Title: Branch Closing
I really like what you did with Jim in this chapter. It's very realistic and fits in with his behavior in The Merger. Great Job!
Author's Response: Ah, thank you, I feel validated :-)
10 [Report This]Date: September 11, 2007 07:44 am Title: Branch Closing
His bitterness seemed realistic to me and the idea of Larissa being his sister works.
Author's Response: Thanks, I was worried there . . .
Date: September 10, 2007 11:50 pm Title: Branch Closing
I think you totally matched how Jim is feeling between Branch Closing and The Merger and it totally works. Really great work!
Author's Response: Ah, thank you, I don't like bitter Jim, but I see where he's coming from.