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Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 12, 2007 05:52 am Title: The Ultimatum

SWIFFER!! This was BRILLIANT!!! Really, you just keep on amazing me with every new chapter! And now, let's move on to a new segment in our show, entitled, "Things Mose Loved About This Chapter." 

-That Andy's mentoring skills are gleaned from Mastercard commercials.

-That Jim is both confident enough to fight for Pam at this early stage, yet still be kind of awkward and dorky around her off-air.

-That mysteriously locked supply closet. What could be in there? My guess is that nobody should try and find out. The results could be too horrifying to comprehend, and it'd be like that scene in Raiders of the Lost Ark, when everyone's faces melt off. 

-Most of all, I loved, loved, LOVED Jim's sneaky way of showing Pam that she had the power within her all along! I mean, who knew that ten bucks to Andy would be akin to Dorothy's ruby slippers, or Dumbo's magic feather?

Again...BRILLIANT chapter. Best so far, and that's saying something, my friend! 



Author's Response: Well, the joke I was going for was that the supply closet was "occupied."  Oh well, joke didn't land. I know this is way late, but thanks for everything, Mose!  P.S.  How's that burn doing? :-P

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12, 2007 05:34 am Title: The Ultimatum

Hmm... I notice there is a supply closet at the station.  Niiiiiice.  And I notice that Pam seems to be 'fine with her choices', at least with a nudge from Jim.  Cannot wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading, lisahoo :)

Reviewer: Cassandra Mulder Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12, 2007 02:38 am Title: The Ultimatum

I'll admit it. I was skeptical (you would find that's just in my nature), but you managed to transition these characters into radio work with spot-on accuracy. hee They're all the same characters, it's just a different venue.

I'm really enjoying it, and I can't wait to see Jim and Pam become official co-hosts. :) 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you feel that I'm making this setting work!  It means a lot.  Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: moofoot Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12, 2007 01:26 am Title: The Ultimatum

hee, ultimatum. I love this.

I kind of hate this story, merely on the grounds that I cannot come up with anything to say that makes sense, and usually my reviews are so much better. Oh well - I shall practice, and hopefully for your next chapter I'll come up with something that isn't just i love this so, so, so, so, so much.  



Author's Response: Your reviews are just fine!  Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: DayDreamBeliever Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2007 04:57 am Title: A Word of Advice

new co-host!!! i love it!  this is so great. and can i thank you for NOT having pam already in a relationship? that cuts down on so much tension and angst which, though they have their place, is exciting.

Author's Response: Haha, you're quite welcome :)  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: BaraJam Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2007 12:12 am Title: A Word of Advice

Im loving this senario. Update soon please

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: moofoot Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2007 11:23 pm Title: A Word of Advice

I love this story, OK? I'm a fangirling mess right here, I'm telling you. Freaking love this. Iloveit so much - and I love where you're going with this. NO ROY, NO KAREN, and adorable Jim/Pam. Cannot wait for an update. 

I love this so much I had absolutely nothing substantial to say. :P 



Author's Response: Haha, it was all substantial, trust me! :)  Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: una Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2007 11:22 pm Title: A Word of Advice

I just frickin love this story. I am having such a fun time reading about our beloved characters in a whole new setting. And somehow a radio setting works *perfectly* for them. I can't wait for the next chapter of co-hosting!!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so glad you think the setting works!  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Stablergirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2007 10:24 pm Title: A Word of Advice

haha can't resist toby.  I love this story.  Can't wait to see what happens once Pam is Jim's cohost!!! Update soon!



Author's Response: Gotta love the Tobester :)  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: GreenDress Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2007 07:25 pm Title: A Word of Advice

This is so fun!  What an original idea!

Author's Response: Hey, thanks!  Glad you're liking it :)

Reviewer: Joni24 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2007 06:43 pm Title: A Word of Advice

OMG, I can't believe that I almost missed this story! It's amazing and I can't wait for the Jim and Pam show! Update soon!



Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: blueturfbronco Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2007 05:08 pm Title: A Word of Advice

Well, if Toby says so.

 Great story so far.  Jim and Pam as co-hosts should be awesome.  I can imagine chapters full of will they won't they sexual tension that ultimately leads nowhere...



Author's Response: You're darn tootin' there will be :)  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2007 04:14 pm Title: A Word of Advice

Quieter than a woman having sex with Toby.  Ouch. 

And WTG, FNB/DCMP.  Or something else with lots of initials... 



Author's Response:

DCMP?  What is that, like...Dwight Carnage Mayhem Palooza?  I'm confused.

Thanks for reading, lisahoo! 

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2007 03:07 pm Title: A Word of Advice

Ha! The "quieter than a woman having sex with Toby" line took me completely by surprise and made me burst out laughing.

And go Pam! Woooo! 



Author's Response:

Haha, yes, I'm so glad you liked that line!  Poor Toby, can't catch a break even in an AU.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2007 02:03 pm Title: A Word of Advice

WHOO HOO! Love the new direction you decided to go with this! Todd Packer as a relationship expert? Genius. 

Just a fantastic chapter, and I think this new radio show will win in its demographics! :) Excellent work, as usual!



Author's Response:

I think he needs his own show.  He could be the next Oprah.

*sombrero snort*

Glad you liked it, Mose :)  Thanks for everything!

Reviewer: FashionShow Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2007 01:32 pm Title: A Word of Advice

"She's my new co-host." got me to squeal. And clap. At work. Where I'm supposed to be working. Not reading fanfic.

Oh well ... I love it! More soon, please! :)



Author's Response:

I think you can be forgiven for your habit at work.  Where do you think I wrote this chapter? ;)  More to come soon!  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: bee sly Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2007 12:49 pm Title: The Big Guns From Philly

Well if Toby insists....

I HAD to leave feedback for this amazingly orginal fic! I just love this so far it's completely spot on. Oh how i wish i could wake up to jim every morning..*mind starts to wander* but this is the next best thing. I could totally picture Michael wearing a south park tie.So Pam is now his co-host! YAY!! Will she be the new Dear Abby? Perhaps Dear Pammy?lol...Please update more.. I don't know what else to say besides this fic is so cereal it's captain crunch, and me and the capt'n can make it happen!

lol...If your from the philly area Preston and Steve on WMMR!! GADZOOKS!

 



Author's Response: Well, thank you so much! I love Captain Crunch hehe.  Thanks so much for reading and there's more to come soon!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2007 12:44 pm Title: A Word of Advice

I love it! 

Author's Response: I'm glad!  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Shassafrass Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2007 12:14 pm Title: A Word of Advice

Awesome. This must continue.

Author's Response: It will indeed :)  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: supergirlsudz Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2007 12:02 pm Title: A Word of Advice

Ah, this story is so fun! You perfectly capture the warm feelings you get when you meet someone new :-) And I love it when Pam steps in and shows how awesome she is. Heck, if Jim and Pam did a morning radio show, I'd listen! Good stuff!

Author's Response: Wouldn't we all? :)  Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2007 11:47 am Title: A Word of Advice

This whole thing is so much fun, though I have to admit the mere thought of Todd Packer dishing out relationship advice made me want to curl up in the fetal position.  Tremendous job, funny and adorable. 

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  Yeah, dear God, can you imagine this guy given a microphone?  Anyway, so glad you liked it and thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: kgreene Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2007 11:35 am Title: A Word of Advice

You know... I have to admit. I usually don't go for the "Office meets Blues Clues" or "What if Jim and Pam were on the Titanic' stories( oh boy, I've just gone and created a whole new challenge!) but this is really good. I guess I DO go for these. Any story that has these two great characters finding each other is a story worth telling. And you tell it well!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much for giving it a chance!  Office meets Blues Clues...yikes.  I'm so glad you like the story and thanks again for reading!

Reviewer: BlueJeanBaby Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2007 11:21 am Title: A Word of Advice

Yay!  Pam and Jim are a team!!  Awesome!!

 and Dr. Todd!! LOL!!!



Author's Response: Haha, I couldn't resist :)  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Susan M Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2007 10:13 pm Title: Concentration

This is so great.  What a fun idea.  Can't wait to see what happens next. 

Author's Response: Thanks for reading Susan! :)

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2007 09:09 pm Title: Concentration

Yay for the meeting of Jim and Pam. And, oh my God, Angela's show was hilarious. You totally fooled me with that cat thing. And Angela/Dwight! "Excel spreadsheets"! They are SO weird, but awesome.

Author's Response: "So weird, but awesome"...kind of sums up Dwangela don't you think? :)  Thanks for reading!

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