9 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2006 09:53 am Title: Anger
"But here's the thing."
So Jim. Great voices here.
Author's Response: :) There are so many times when I actually hear him speak the words when I type them. That was totally one of them. Glad it came across!
10 [Report This]Date: August 31, 2006 06:31 pm Title: Anger
Warning - I just got back from vacation and will be reviewing everything I've missed like a woman possessed. That includes this story and anything else you might have written in the past 11 days...
Loved "anger"...Pam challenging Jim with "you had no right" is what I picture could happen.
Author's Response: IMHO - We don't see near enough AngryJim or Pam. Welcome back from vacation!!!
10 [Report This]Date: August 23, 2006 01:42 pm Title: Anger
Oh wow -- just, wow. I held my breath through most of that. Love it that he stopped the elevator and grabbed her by the arms -- guh. I'd have smacked one on him right there, but then, I'm not Pam. Ahem.
Seriously -- so well done! I'm really enjoying this series. Okay, gotta go read the next installment...
Author's Response:
Anger is my favorite chapter by far.
And please. She must have been really stunned because - c'mon now. :)
Date: August 21, 2006 12:30 pm Title: Anger
Wow very intense.
Author's Response: Glad to hear it came across. I intended it to be.
10 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2006 10:22 am Title: Anger
Oh, Pam, wake up! I don't know how she resists him--I certainly couldn't.
Author's Response:
I know right?!?!?!
fyi...Next chapter her resolve is not quite as strong. ;)
Date: August 21, 2006 06:40 am Title: Anger
Just got back from a semi-crappy trip during which I've been severly jonesing for a little Jam and what do I find? A new fix! Yay!
"He slammed the emergency stop button and dropped his bag to the floor. He gripped her elbows and backed her against the wall. Even as he did, he didn’t know why he was even bothering. He was trying once more because it was clear that this would be his very last chance."
Sexy/angry Jim! The best!
Author's Response:
Most of the time when I write the scenes play out in my head and that one? Very few have me aching to see them onscreen but that is something I am DYING to see them act out.
SIGH.
Glad I could make your day better!!
10 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2006 05:45 am Title: Anger
Man, I don't know why, but I just LOVE it when Jim is angry. Of course Pam totally needs to be hit over the head with this in order to get moving. I just hope she realizes it sooner than later. Oh and I loved this part:
“Now this won’t be awkward. At all.”
That's SO Jim. Can't wait for the "After"!!
Author's Response: Interesting. It seems that the ladies LOVE AngryJim. HA! This story is all about Pam having to do a little work because that boy's had enough. I'm glad you liked it.
10 [Report This]Date: August 20, 2006 09:54 pm Title: Anger
Go Jim. She needed to be hit over the head (metaphorically, of course!) with it.
“You’re just trying to confuse me because y-y-you just want me for yourself.” She protested, but even to her own ears it sounded incredibly weak.
It wasn’t at all the reply he’d been hoping to hear. “Congratulations. You’re onto me.”
That was perfect.
Author's Response: I really intended this to be all about Pam being mad but once I started writing it I realized it wouldn't happen that way. Jim needed to really lay everything out there so that she'd have no choice but to face it. I'm so glad you thought so too!
10 [Report This]Date: August 20, 2006 08:28 pm Title: Anger
Go, Jim. You tell her. Love when he says, 'Congratulations, you're on to me.' He's very sexy when fed up and sarcastic, and that's not easy to pull off.
Really looking forward to the next chapters.
Author's Response:
She needs to be told. It's not fair for her to make him feel like it's all been one sided and I'd love to see him really call her on it. So...I decided to let him. :)
And yes I have to agree. Very sexy indeed.
10 [Report This]Date: August 20, 2006 08:25 pm Title: Anger
And the AFTER??? Don't leave me hanging!!! Mental note--don't read the "before" until the "after" is written!
Oh, yeah, nice job....blah blah blah. Now get to writin'! ;-)
Author's Response: HA! I'm working on it. LOL! Usually I have both done at the same time but I got lazy. It'll be here soon. I promise!
Date: August 20, 2006 07:45 pm Title: Anger
I seriously held my breath throughout this entire chapter. So intense...so in character...pretty much a perfect JAM fight. I'm really proud of your Jim :)
Author's Response:
All you people with the breath holding. You're making me so nervous!!!
I'm sooooooooooo proud of him too.
Date: August 20, 2006 07:35 pm Title: Anger
Okay, so Jim stopping the elevator and backing her into the wall was awesome. I love that he's angry as well as her. This is just... So. Good. More, please!
Author's Response:
Hee! That was one of my favorite parts. Me too!!
More is on it's way...
9 [Report This]Date: August 20, 2006 07:30 pm Title: Anger
"You finished with your little tantrum?”
Don't ask me why but I kind of wanted to cheer at this line.
Words cannot even describe how in character and perfect this fight is. Can't wait to read more. And I love the entire set-up of this fic. Brilliant.
Author's Response:
Can't you just hear him saying it? I think he's entitled to be a little pissed.
I'm a bit surprised by how much I enjoy writing them fighting with each other.
I'm glad you're enjoying it too. :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 20, 2006 07:20 pm Title: Anger
Oh, that was so good. Very intense. Now I am really needing chapter 4.
<> I need my happy place!Author's Response:
Thanks!! I hoped it would be. I'm working on it!!
10 [Report This]Date: August 20, 2006 07:16 pm Title: Anger
Ooh, Jim with cajones. Nice.
Author's Response:
I knew they were there this whole time.
HA! I meant that in the most innocent of ways btw. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: August 20, 2006 07:13 pm Title: Anger
Whoa. Brutally honest Jim with nothing left to lose. “Will it make a difference? Will it stop you?” *shivers* I think I stopped breathing at that point.
Author's Response: Please keep breathing. I don't want your passing out on my conscience. ;) I really want to see him kinda angry. I have to admit I'm a little mad at Pam now for throwing everything back at him.