9 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2006 10:06 am Title: Impatience
NotPuttingUpWithItAnyMoreJim is awesome. Good for him. Again, great voices here - you capture them well!
Author's Response: Isn't he cool??? Love him!
10 [Report This]Date: August 22, 2006 07:42 pm Title: Impatience
i just realized what a bad reviewer i've been. i've read all your chapters...but just forgot to leave reviews. loved this chapter (of course!). the way you portray their relationship seems so real--a great mixture of chemistry & heat, but with this dynamic of jim pushing and pam resisting. sad, sweet & perfect :)
Author's Response: LOL! No worries!! I'm happy to have a review - no matter when! The way I've envisioned it, Jim would initally think that having her would solve everything - and it wouldn't be all sunlight and rainbows...at first. Eventually she'll get over it. That is...if I have anything to say about it. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2006 03:36 pm Title: Impatience
Nursing, eh? Why must it always be the naughty nurse? ;)
Author's Response:
Hmmm. I don't know. But hey...if the shoe fits. ;)
9 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2006 02:53 pm Title: Impatience
Could I love these two more? I could try, but I don't think it is possible. ;) I think you did a good job of setting up the conflicts that I totally can see arising between them, and how Pam would try to avoid it at all costs. I don't care if naughty nurse/secretary is cliché, because you just made it so funny.
Author's Response:
I'm with you MA. I'm not sure it's possible myself.
As my buddy Bill once wrote, ;) "The course to true love never did run smooth." Jim and Pam - IMHO - would be no exception. :)
And HA! OK then. I won't worry.
Author's Response:
That would be "of" not "to".
Grrrr. I played Hermia in that freaking play. You'd think I'd remember the correct lines!!
10 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2006 02:49 pm Title: Impatience
Love the last two words. Very clever.
You're definitely onto something with this angry, impatient, assertive Jim...inspires me to finish the story I've been toying with ad nauseum. Please keep it coming!
Author's Response:
HA! Honestly? The first draft had her repeating "Really."
And it's so fun to write him this way. I almost think he needs to be like this in S3 - because he's put himself so far out there already- Pam either needs to reciprocate in some way shape or form or he's got to walk away completely.
At least that's how I see it. :)
Date: August 21, 2006 01:01 pm Title: Impatience
This captures them exactly. Not perfect, but right.
Author's Response:
Exactly!!! Thanks so much ngllisi.
PS: I also just wanted to say I really appreciate your reviews!
Date: August 21, 2006 12:33 pm Title: Impatience
Nice chapter can't wait for the next.
Author's Response: Thanks gotkona. It'll be on it's way soon!
Date: August 21, 2006 12:28 pm Title: Impatience
God, they're just so cute. And I don't know if I've said this before but they're so in character that it's amazing. You've got them down. Especially Jim.
I cannot wait for bargaining!
Author's Response:
I may be wearing out my DVR rewinding scenes that involve Jim.
It's possible. ;)
And yes. I agree. They are adorable.