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Reviewer: nomadshan Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01, 2006 10:17 pm Title: Waiting

Great inner monologue for Pam - I kept thinking, Why doesn't she just write it down?!  But then there wouldn't be many more lovely chapters to come, right?

Author's Response: HA!  She's a little sick.  Finding a pen and paper might be too much to ask.  Plus I liked that it was sort of jinx-y  even though not nearly as playful.   :) 

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 31, 2006 06:46 pm Title: Waiting

Again with the tears! You're good at wrenching emotions out of me. I get both sides of the 'debate'...Jim's impatience, Pam's reluctance. There just has to be a way to work it out!

Author's Response: I think it might just turn out OK....

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 23, 2006 01:53 pm Title: Waiting

Ahhhh!  I'm loving this so much -- you capture their voices so well.  Update!!!  :o)

Author's Response: THANK YOU!!!!  I'm trying!!!  Pesky work. ;)

Reviewer: MrsHalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 23, 2006 11:51 am Title: Waiting

another great story from another great author!! i love your work. keep it up. =)

Author's Response: Aww thanks MrsHalpert.  Hee!!  Your screen name makes me :)

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 23, 2006 08:55 am Title: Waiting

please update soon so we can read more of this.

Author's Response: I'll try!!

Reviewer: ExReceptionist Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 23, 2006 06:04 am Title: Waiting

Wow, she's really torturing our boy! :) Seriously though, I love where you're taking Pam in this - revealing her desire to be her own person so she can be an equal to Jim. She's going to throw him a bone soon though, right?

Author's Response:

I know!  The poor guy!!  I think that she definitely needs to do that.  She's so stuck in a rut that I think it needs to happen. 

And yes...she will. :)

Reviewer: yippee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 22, 2006 07:52 pm Title: Waiting

so so good. it's just so real--so true to their characters and i think that what you have them feeling is spot-on. hopefully pam will come to her senses soon...in both before & after time :)

Author's Response:

hopefully pam will come to her senses soon...in both before & after time

I think you can pretty much count on it. ;)

Reviewer: proposals Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 22, 2006 07:27 pm Title: Waiting

I'm so happy they're together but I'm so sad that Jim continues to suffer, and god he's just so fucking sweet and wonderful. I'm still loving this, of course. I can't wait for depression! ...Oh, that so does not sound right.

Author's Response:

I know.  I'm hoping you'll feel better when the next "After" rolls around.  Unless something crazy happens, Pam's going to come to her senses. 

Hang tight!!

Reviewer: Par5 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 22, 2006 07:26 pm Title: Waiting

You had me at hello. And then you threw in this - If you could just tell me how much more time Pam. Please? Just so I'd know…

You're killing me! But in a good way.

Author's Response: The poor guy.  I mean.  I feel really bad for torturing him - but then I realize it's only 4 more chapters until "Acceptance"  and I'm able to get over it.

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