10 [Report This]Date: August 31, 2006 08:38 pm Title: Acceptance
Yay, great chapter. Begins with angst and ends with smut...my favorite!
Author's Response:
Is there any other type of chapter? LOL!
10 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2006 08:35 pm Title: Acceptance
soooo good! I liked how he was resistant at first and made her work for it. The line you wrote after her telling him she loved him, when he ducked his head and smiled--for some reason, I could totally picture that momtent--and I loved it!
Also good: rougher making out, leading to commenting on how it wasn't weird, then having it get a little weird, but then going back to bliss. Awesome. Liked where you stopped too--as much as I lurve the smut, it is nice to read a more pg-13 story every now and then! Well done, per usual!
Author's Response: Thanks Boof! I think we're all agreeing Pam needs to - depending on how the premiere goes - make amends to Jim BIG TIME in S3. When I wrote that Jim moment I could totally see him in my mind so I'm glad it came across. Thanks for letting me know the semi-smut worked. I always get so antsy about that!!
10 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2006 07:27 pm Title: Acceptance
God that was awesome! I really loved the chapter when they were at the wedding. It may not be canon but it really, really fits the character of Jim and I loved how Pam realized how amazing he really is and finally decided she was doing a crap job of showing it. That explanation is canon in my mind now, lol. Great job!
Author's Response:
Thanks kristendotcom! I think that chapter might have been my favorite. I'm of the opinion that Pam needs to get with the program and I could totally see her not fully realizing what she had until she'd actually been with him a while. I'm so glad you liked it too!!
10 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2006 05:21 pm Title: Acceptance
You know how I have pledged my love and devotion to this story! :) This chapter certainly did not disappoint. I liked seeing Jim put some barriers to protect himself. It was great to see Pam having to deal with the consequences of her actions. Oh, and a little sexy moment thrown in has never hurt anyone. ;)
Author's Response: :) I thought it was about time he put up a little defense. And yay! for sexy moments. Thanks MA!
10 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2006 12:18 pm Title: Acceptance
Loved this chapter! A little bit angry/fed-up Jim, then sweet, playful Jim. Perfection!
Author's Response: I myself think of that as the perfect combination. LOL! Glad you agree!
10 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2006 12:05 pm Title: Acceptance
Yay! It was all that I hoped for and more! I really didn't expect for him to be inside the apartment. Cute. Loved this!
Author's Response: Thanks proposals!! I'm glad I surprised you!
10 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2006 11:50 am Title: Acceptance
I'm loving this so much! I meant to tell you earlier that I think your explanation re: Jim's parents/his father is really so believable. This chapter was pure fun -- and also very realistic.
Author's Response: Thanks girl7! I just kept thinking something had to happen. I'm glad you found it believable.
10 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2006 10:11 am Title: Acceptance
More more more. Jim was so beautifully written. I just want to squeeze him.
Author's Response: There is quite a long line for the Jim squeezing. Take a number gotkona. ;) LOL! I'm glad you liked it.
Date: August 30, 2006 09:37 am Title: Acceptance
Jim is utterly defenseless against her, isn't he? He tried his best, though- leaving her out there for 20 minutes.
I'm glad he (and you!) made Pam have to be the brave one. He risks his heart every time he even talks to her- it's time we see that same strength from her.
Author's Response:
He certainly is. And I almost had them passing each other in the night - with him leaving that drive thru to go to her but ulitmately I liked this version better.
This is totally my Pam steps up fic. :) I think you'll like the next chapter too. Well...I hope! Thanks nqllisi!
10 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2006 07:57 am Title: Acceptance
i really have nothing else to say about your writing except that i love you :) especially liked how you made this a bit difficult for pam. and the ending...i have no words.
Author's Response: Aww yipee that's too sweet! I'm so glad you liked it!
10 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2006 07:46 am Title: Acceptance
That is exactly how it would be! Pam has anger issues and this was dead on. Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks Jonah5 - I'm so glad you thought so!!
Date: August 30, 2006 06:34 am Title: Acceptance
Oh man. This chapter just gave me goosebumps. I really liked that Jim wouldn't make it easy for Pam- which, after all he's been through makes total sense. I just can't believe this means this story is almost over.
Author's Response: Hee! You saying that gives ME goosebumps. I know - I'm sad - for all sorts of reasons...specifically because I think as the premiere grows closer I'm all Post Casino Night-ed out. :( Never fear. I'm sure something else will inspire me. :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2006 06:32 am Title: Acceptance
Yay for resolution on all that angst earlier! Love it!
Author's Response: C'mon. You kinda figured that I would make up for it didn't you?? LOL! Thanks!