Reviews For Cold Openings
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Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2008 08:43 am Title: Dummies

These are really good, very well written and I'd like to see the shows that came after.

Author's Response: Thank you! Boy, I'd like to see these shows too...

Reviewer: Iheartstanley Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2008 02:17 pm Title: Dummies

I hope they do that Classic!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: dasani Signed [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2008 09:52 pm Title: Dummies

An early review right here for the very-soon-future release of a new Cold Opening? ^^? Yes? Maybe? :)

Author's Response: LOL... wow, that;s a new one...lol.. you're sweet! I have a few ideas but nothing really worked up yet.. soon, I promise!

Reviewer: dasani Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14, 2008 08:59 pm Title: Dummies

Okay, this review is for all that I've missed -- 15/10, 9 gold stars and a china cabinet full of Dundies.

I love your CO's.. you still have it... I can't believe it's not Beesley, (I can't believe this isn't in the show). Great job and keep them coming!!

(I wish you had a blog that I could subscribe to so I could keep up better when I'm on travel!) Great Work Kgreene, you never cease to break me into loud laughter!

Author's Response: Hey thanks! It's good to hear from you, I missed ya!

Reviewer: Jewelsy Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2008 05:17 pm Title: Dummies

I absolutly love your writting. I usually like Jammy fluffy smutty goodness, but your cold openings are so in character, well written and absolutley hillarious. I laugh out loud as I read them to my husband. He says He can hear the characters actually saying the words you write. I hope you never run out of ideas.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I hope I never do, too. And I really appreciate you reading these. I know that 99% of the people on this site would rather read angsty, fluffy Jam stuff (I don't believe I'm actually going to admit this... but I read them too. I even wrote some in my other scripts. Oh, well...there goes my Guys Club card.) and I know that the C/O's won't attract nearly as many readers as those do but I'm glad that you and some others have taken the time to try my stuff out. I thank you for that and the kind words. Anytime someone says they laughed I feel great. Thanks again!

Reviewer: jamhonestly Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2008 05:14 pm Title: Dummies

That's truly awesome. I laughed the whole way through. Pam and Jim are such partners in crime. *sigh* AWESOME!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2008 09:53 am Title: Dummies

Beautiful! I was told to read this series, and I can see that belsum was 100% right.

Author's Response: Wow. Belsium, if you end up reading this, THANK YOU. I REALLY, REALLY appreciate you doing that.

Reviewer: wendolf Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2008 08:38 am Title: Dummies

Ah, don't know how I've missed all these! LOVE them. You do a terrific job of capturing each character, and I could see the majority of these actually being on the show. Keep 'em coming!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I really appreciate that!

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2008 02:40 pm Title: Dummies

Oh please don't change the ending! It's awesome!

Author's Response: Oh. Wow. Thanks!

Reviewer: MintChocolateChip Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2008 12:17 pm Title: Dummies

Wow - kgreene, I can't tell you how much I've enjoyed reading all your cold openings and scripts. It's like Bonus Office, or "Second Drink Office." (supposed to be a compliment) You have an unerring feel for character interactions - I am delighted and will avidly seek out your stuff. I'm new to this site, but have been enjoying reading (spending waaaay too much time doing so) the talented authors such as yourself. More soon I hope!

Author's Response: Wow. Thank you SO much. That was really sweet of you to say. And I totally took " Second Drink Office" as a compliment! Thanks again!

Reviewer: dasani Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14, 2008 07:38 am Title: Dummies

Hee, so cute! You're on a roll! I love it when Jim says something and then stutters.... :)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: alucier Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2008 04:24 pm Title: Dummies

Oh man I laughed so hard at this. Got a little out of character for pam towards the end I think, but great job!

Author's Response: Thanks! I really went back and forth about whether this was something Pam would do. After I read it back, I felt more comfortable with it, especially when she sort of snorts and laugh at it. I feel like she is looser and freer with Jim but still doesn't realize just how sexy she is. But I can understand if it feels out of character. I think that Fancy New Beesly is still growing, though!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: November 21, 2007 07:21 am Title: Dummies

“Is Michael Scott gonna have to smack a bitch?”  I just wet my pants.  Keep 'em comin, K.  You just turned my strike-induced frown upside down : )

Author's Response: lol... thanks! Yeah, I'm bummed, too. All we have is each other, right now. But with all the great writers on this site, that's not bad at all.

Reviewer: kony5669 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 17, 2007 01:21 pm Title: Dummies

I love this series... I think it's so in-character (which is something that I always appreciate) and funny. I can imagine most (if not all) of this things happening in the show.

Author's Response: Thank you! That is high praise! I really appreciate that!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25, 2007 07:15 pm Title: Dummies

This was so funny - and so them!  Great job!

 



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2007 12:43 pm Title: Dummies

You are so good at this!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I wish some particular folks out west thought the same...

Reviewer: dentonj Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21, 2007 06:47 pm Title: Dummies

You really have the characters down to a T!  I mean, the dialogue is perfect.  This really would be a good one for them to do.  The tag of Michael's narcissism at the end was just right.  "Wow... is that me in there?"  I can hear the fascination and delight in his voice. :)

Author's Response: Thanks.. It took me a little while to figure out what I wanted Michael to say... glad you liked!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20, 2007 07:56 am Title: Dummies

Love this one.  I would love to see that : )

Author's Response: Thanks! You and me both!

Reviewer: jinx Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20, 2007 07:40 am Title: Dummies

That was awesome kgreene.  Believable as a possible prank/cold open.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Big Tuna Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2007 04:57 pm Title: Dummies

Ha! Go Pam! That was a really clever cold opening.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2007 11:49 am Title: Dummies

These are all very funny. You seem to like tormenting Dwight as much as Jim does. Nicely done!

Author's Response: I do.. I really do... Dwight is such a great target, I just can't help myself. Thanks!

Reviewer: alucier Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2007 06:53 am Title: Dummies

Ha these seem totally plausible, spot-on and hilarious! Great job! Keep 'em coming!


Author's Response: Hey, thanks!

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