10 [Report This]Date: July 10, 2009 07:58 pm Title: Early
PERFECTION.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: December 04, 2008 12:34 pm Title: Early
This one was great! I could hear Toby's lines. Awesome.
Author's Response: Ah, Toby... good to have him back... thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: November 09, 2008 07:41 pm Title: Early
I so freaking miss Toby :(
Author's Response: I don't think we've seen the last of Toby....
10 [Report This]Date: June 25, 2008 10:06 am Title: Early
Gross I hate Toby. But I love love love these cold opens so double kudos to you! (:
Author's Response: lol...thanks! Now, do you hate Toby because of last season or just in general? Curious.
10 [Report This]Date: October 24, 2007 12:05 am Title: Early
This:
MICHAEL
Wow… it’s the Dunder-Mifflin production of
Beauty and the Beast! (laughs to camera)
Beauty and Tobeast!
(laughs again, then points at camera)
Don’t sue me, Disney. Seriously, though…
You really know how to ruin a morning, Toby.
is GOLD!!! XD Seriously, these openings are show-calibre! Bravo!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hope to keep writing and I hope you keep enjoying!
Date: October 01, 2007 06:27 pm Title: Early
Lowering Michael's chair each week is too funny! I'm glad Toby found a way to get back at Michael a bit.
Author's Response: Yeah, Toby needs a little weekly revenge against Michael. It's only fair! Thanks!
Date: September 20, 2007 02:43 pm Title: Early
Tobeast. I laughed so hard. You really have a knack for these.
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope I can keep it going!
Date: September 20, 2007 10:34 am Title: Early
Okay, so I have the world's most obnoxious laugh...seriously. It starts off as kind of a normal-sounding giggle and then morphs into a sort of Burt-Reynolds-in-the-Smokey-movies thing and then moves straight up through hyena territory, landing squarely in the land of the guffaw, which is vaguely reminiscent of a braying donkey, only possibly louder, and no matter where I am, people turn around wearing the WTF? expression. So yes, Dude, you make me guffaw. Thanks a whole hell of a lot.
Author's Response: LOL.. wow, that sounds BEYOND sexy! lol... That Burt Reynolds high-pitched cackle! Classic. And then you take it up an another octave or two? Talent. Pure talent. lol... "The Land Of the Guffaw." Isn't that the sequel to 'The Land of the Lost"? Wow. I am prouder than proud that I caused such an amalgam of laughter. Thank you. I, too, have a bone to pick with you(that needs re-phrasing). If you saw my last review for Not a Word... Chapter 11, then you know what I mean... rn
Date: September 20, 2007 09:35 am Title: Early
That's awesome! I love Pam and Toby! Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks... Toby's gotta get some love, y'know?
9 [Report This]Date: September 20, 2007 07:51 am Title: Early
Thanks for writing some fun for Toby - goodness knows he needs it
Author's Response: Doesn't he? Poor Toby....
Date: September 20, 2007 07:30 am Title: Early
YES! it is always sweet to see Toby one-up Michael! i know that's horrible... wait. no. Michael is horrible to Toby, so he totally deserves it. I love Toby, and I'm glad you included him in your wonderful series of Cold Opens :) great chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Initially, this was gonna be more of just Pam and Toby but I needed to have Toby win. I love his whole deal with Pam, unrequited love is always fascinating, but I needed him to end up on top for a change. Wait... that needs rephrasing... lol... thanks!
Date: September 20, 2007 06:49 am Title: Early
HA! These are all so awesome. Are you sure you're not one of the show's writers?!
Author's Response: Oh, please, I would murder to be one of the show's writers. THAT would be perfect. But no, I'm just some guy putting up stories when I'm supposed to be working... See, now, you just went and depressed me... {: (