Reviews For Laughter
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Reviewer: Anne-Rose Sweetkins Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2023 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 3

Laughter is a beautiful sound, huh?

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2021 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 3

Jim being grumpy about her Sudoku record even as they have their third first kiss is a really nice and funny touch.

Author's Response: Listen. You weren't supposed to find this one. This was the one I wrote as a wee teenager instead of paying attention in my math class. But I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway! Hahaha

Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 18, 2020 10:57 am Title: Chapter 3

I LOVED THIS. So, so sweet and well written and just good. I loved them sitting on the tracks and getting to share their first kiss with somewhere Pam loved so much. And him just thinking about her sodoku record made me laugh. I loved this so much.

Reviewer: support_the_rabid Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: November 05, 2007 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 3

This was perfect. Fluff is great for their first date. The end of chapter 2 was particularly great with them calling each other by their last names. Thanks for posting!

Author's Response: Thank you! It just seemed like them to use each other's last names. I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: banana slings Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 05, 2007 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 3

Phantasic!! I loveee this story too much for words. It makes me feel warm & fuzy & wish I was Pam. Pam + Jim + railroad tracks (+rainbow scarf?) =  perfection. Seriously, you have talent & skills, my dear. Use them wisely...and get a new notebook!!! I'm looking forward to the next one =)

Author's Response: Oh, he's definitely wearing the rainbow scarf...hahaha

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 05, 2007 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 3

Wow, this was really beautiful! I hope to read more from you soon!

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