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Reviewer: Boysenberry Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2016 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 2

Wow. That was seriously amazing. You can almost feel it happening. Nice job.

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 01, 2006 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 2

Wow. Very hot, and well-written.

Reviewer: yippee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 27, 2006 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 2

love this. both chapters had such great momentum...and were really hot :)

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 26, 2006 08:37 am Title: Chapter 2

Loved the way you did this.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 26, 2006 08:36 am Title: Chapter 1

wow that was great.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 26, 2006 06:18 am Title: Chapter 2

Lovely reversal.

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 25, 2006 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 2

You gave a very interesting rhythm to this piece.  That was a good first fic.  I hope you continue writing.

Reviewer: proposals Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 25, 2006 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 2

Very, very good. A very cool way to set the pace.

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 25, 2006 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 2

Wow.  *fans self*

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 25, 2006 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great first fic!  Their removing the dots from each other was so very hot... whew!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 25, 2006 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow. The repetition is such a cool device; it creates a pulse for this piece that really ramps up the tension. Nice choice of "hearing" for Jim, and "feeling" for Pam, too- since stereotypically men are more physical and women more emotional, it really rings true. Excellent job for your first fic. Write more!

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